ZeN0N
College Student majoring in Art & Design, Someone who loves fantasy stories, Part-time writer.
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Its master duh
Oh? A novel character found out he is a novel character! noice
What a way to start a story
I can't help but imagine this place to one in Skyrim
It's a newbie mistake, don't worry Sunless, you still have an MC buff!
Maybe? Well, imagine, if you're a cat will you kiss a rat? I guess no. But, at least cats do eat or catch rats
After re-reading this now I'm sure MC is a schizo
Nah, the MC is a schizo 😅
Nah, it's just showing that he has personality and I think it's good to have a monologue or narration like this for 1st pov
Hey, the Author can't help but do this for *word counts* 😂
IDK maybe he's a psycho or an S lol
Ayo? She said she's the cat and called Zio a rat. So she got the Zio's tongue meant that she kissed him? 🧐
This sentence and the next one are inconsistent with tenses. Doesn't > Didn't Is > Was
Oh? It's F minus, right? It's a bit unusual to place the minus sign before the letter xD
I thought 180 cm is tall... cuz mine only 172 cm 😞