Naruto just played in the hands of hiruzan idiot

yes that's what I also thought

why are you making the mc more emo character

next chapter please

i think it's good but some problem with the grammar and words and i don't know why the mc act all mighty with his limited power. it would have wise to act like that when he get the level of hashirama or madara level. until then he could have acted as a low key

i want a Naruto who doesn't like hiruzan a

i like the story and all but the grammar is a problem though and allso white beard progress was 40 firstly but now it is 4. i think you made a mistake there. but I like the story though and one more thing can you please use characters name as same as the anime

can you change the name it's confusing sometimes