"Malik! My family is gone, there's no trace of 'em, no blood, no packed bags; nothing, they're just gone. I have nothing left, so if someone's offering a way out, I'ma take it."
I don't believe a comma belongs in the sentence "if only he had the strength, to get up"?
"Oh, this is so nostalgic, you look just like him, human." The creature snarls. "Too bad your little human there can't help you out, huh? If only he had the strength, to get up and do something. How sad..."
I'd slob on this guy's meat 👌. I'd slob on this guy's meat 👌. I'd slob on this guy's meat 👌. I'd slob on this guy's meat 👌. I'd slob on this guy's meat 👌.