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KioshiPen

KioshiPen

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Anime Lover! “Yours truly, sincerely, without any reason, but pure love. I don't mind those obsidian eyes staring at me for eternity, baby.” —Yuki Also available on Wattpad: KioshiPen

2022-09-18 JoinedJapan
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  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPen10 months ago
    Posted

    I liked the story well, but it's too fast-paced. Add a little bit of narration and introduction to the characters or ever scenes for the readers to comprehend and work their imaginations effectively. Next is the "dialogue inside the character's mind". try to use quotation marks or ['] signs or italicize it. That way, the readers knows if it's narration or not.

  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPen10 months ago
    Commented

    I'm not into these genres, but I like your style<3

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  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPen10 months ago
    Commented

    love your style<3

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  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPen10 months ago
    Commented

    <3

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  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPena year ago
    Replied to cressidavaughn322

    Hi, good evening, I am very sorry to inform you that I don't engage in such particular activities. Hence, allow me to thank you for the copy-pasted flattery. Please do read my works, truly, if possible. Once again, thank you. Sincerely, Kioshi

  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPena year ago
    Replied to Olivia_ava

    I'm an very sorry to inform you, but I don't engage in such particular activities. Thank you for your offer.

  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPena year ago
    Replied to Dey_Jee

    I'm an very sorry to inform you, but I don't engage in such particular activities. Thank you for your offer.

  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPena year ago
    Replied to Stephenhenry

    I'm an very sorry to inform you, but I don't engage in such particular activities. Thank you for your offer.

  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPena year ago
    Replied to Tworld01

    I'm an very sorry to inform you, but I don't engage in such particular activities. Thank you for your offer.

  • KioshiPen
    KioshiPena year ago
    Replied to Ryan_John2

    We appreciate your offer, but unfortunately, we don't engage with particular activities like these, Kioshi thanks you for your offer, thank you. —TaintedPens

[BL] Labyrinth of Dreams (Official)

Beneath the moonlight shone two pairs of priceless jewel eyes—one was like the depths of the ocean's and one was those of onyx eyes. There was nothing special about them, or so it seemed. Their gazes portrays love burried deep inside the innermost chambers of the heart, everlasting and sincere. No matter where the truth leads, this eyes will glitter the same spark of affection. Amidst the raging storms, the mightiest hurdles or the impenetrable walls, none can stop their love. From the future to the past, no matter how many lies, the heart that spoke the truth can only decide. A story stitched with lies and truth, hiding what's true and what's not, unfolds the only true love that blooms in the field of lies. One day you will understand that among the flower bouquet of lies, at least one daffodil subsides. A novel by Kishi

KioshiPen · Fantasy
16 Chs