Handadai

Thanks for the chapter. I can't wait for November!

I can not recommend this enough! It;'s a LitRPG in a fantasy-based world with a MC that changed from female to male. I can not wait to see how that affects the story and I'm sure it will, the author is fantastic at writing. The characters are so human, they don't feel flat or 2-d, The interactions come off as natural. The dialogue is well written and doesn't feel fake or like something a person wouldn't say. I love the relationship between Leko and Kurio as well as Leko and Friar. I want to see moreeeee. The style of writing is good. The author is more of a narrative writer and not overly descriptive where you start getting bored because there are more descriptions than plot. The world is fascinating. According to the narrative its a world that's poisonous to humans, constantly killing them off. we have yet to see this with Leko only just leaving the safety of his city but I 100% certain, the author will touch on this splendidly. I'm excited to see how the world affects Leko.

Leko's a nice guy hiding behind a cold mask. My type!

Can you bring me a diamond ring and your hand in marriage?

has mr. Pathun not founf him yet? is he an idiot or is Leko just that good at hiding his tracks? and now he's even leaving. poor Mr. Pathun

I like how you write the poison affecting him, it fits nicely. It's okay Leko! you'll get better! hang it there!

Poor Leko seems to be feeling the affects of the poison a little.

It's okay Leko, you're relatable! no one wants to wake up so early. If anyone woke me up that early I'd also call them monsters. They will be slain with sarcasm and a nasty attitude.

I wonder, will we end up with a Cale Henituse 2.0 here? he's already doing better by deciding not to interact with the hero's allies but will it last? I must keep reading to see.

The dialogue flows so naturally! your characters feel so real. I love it.