finish magic system please it was my first work on the page and I hope to finish it ........................................................

wow no se entiende nada

The R-18 thing is frustrating, I'm not saying that the story is bad, but each scene has a time skip, it's better not to put the R-18 and that's it

The truth is great work, on some occasions the author tends to go around the bush and makes the story a bit dense but in general it is a great work, what intrigues me the most is its universe, likewise the story is slow in these 90s maximum caps 4 months passed for the mc, similar to SHK that if he waits for the major introduction to the harem and I hope he has a similar dynamic to SHK

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the author decides if it's good or bad, personally I hope the mc kills him one day

Where I'm going I still don't understand the R-18, there are literally no explicit scenes, just a time skip of the moment and that's it, which is quite disappointing, otherwise it's correct in my opinion

Mmm, very well from what I'm wearing, it's not the masterpiece of the century either, but well, the only thing I don't like very much is that Lilia has more relationships than the mc himself and I don't like yuri very much ... it seems that he is more harem than the lilia that from the mc

It is an excellent work but after investing so much to support the car and the work it has been more than 2 months without updating, I am speechless. I have been reading novels for a short time but I suppose I had bad luck with this work.

Las escalas de poder son estupidas, como le puede ganar a un demonio derrepete si apenas pudo matar al cabellero y en teoria tiene un agujero en el abdomen? derrepende el mc es igual de fuerte que un rango A?

It stays at 4 due to the delay of the updates, the story in my opinion is very good, I have not read many novels but in my opinion it is quite innovative, very good work, I hope it continues and the chapters come out faster.

wait a moment they changed the story, not that the mother was like a goddess?