Quite the exhilarating story with interesting characters. It's nice to see the Jamaican perspective of being saddled in the bosom of capitalism as a bit of a recluse. It could use a bit more emotive language though. Especially when showing the mental anguish, shame, disgust or just general chagrin of the main character being placed in situations diametrically opposed to her personality. Lovely piece. I look forward to reading the rest.