Il_Dottore_writes

Thanks for the encouragement 😊

I love the chemistry.....really wonderful wordplay for our beautiful couple. Looking forward to more!

Let's just say, I'm in love with Rey as a lover. He's such a sweet guy. Love him....Keep it coming!!

Hey! Thanks for your encouraging words.

Haha, thanks for the kind words.

Well well well, Rey is quite the guy, ain't he. By the way, looking forward to more, keep it coming.

Thanks for your suggestion, let's just see how the story unfolds and see if it makes sense.

Could have tapped a little more into Rey's helplessness in the beginning, the conversation of the past is pretty fluid and natural. Nice!

The initial chapters......especially the ones which introduced the major cast, felt a bit rushed.....or should I say, a bit filmy. But after we enter the crux of the story, everything is perfectly balanced. Looking forward to more quality additions and a stunning story.

Looking forward to the rest of the story......