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Author speaking. if you've gone through the novel you will realise that is isn't a regular cheat system novel. and that's why I actually gave the system a name as "Human support system" in other words it meant to be a guide to greatest, the system is there to make a clear part for the host to follow and not to grant the host with everything he wishes, that's why as Aoki (MC) progresses in his football journey so those the challenges get tough and Aoki gets stronger and better. And also the construction of the novels also makes it that the story isn't based on Aoki alone but also diving into the story of other characters that accompany him in his journey and also those he comes across I guarantee that the story will be fun, filled with lots of twist, shocking moments and many more, all you have to do is add to your collection, give me your stones and finally some reviews to help me develop
thanks for noticing the mistake I'll be careful next time
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Then I'll go with your request then. the only problem is that it will be hard on me to give a perfect or detailed description of a fight scene without the visualisation though, but I'll still try my best
Yes just an average person with the basic knowledge of football.You can support me with some stonesđ
sorry for the typo, I'll make sure not to make those mistakes again.You can also send me some stonesđ€
Entiendo bastante lo que quieres decir, pero escĂșchame primero. Le di tantas emociones porque querĂa hacerlo mĂĄs realista. ImagĂnate ver a alguien con quien creciste, enfrentar muchos desafĂos en la vida, compartir momentos felices y tristes colgando sin vida de una cuerda, es muy desalentador y doloroso. SĂ© que debĂ haber añadido demasiadas emociones pero tuve que mostrar el hecho de que Ă©l realmente sentĂa resentimiento hacia la aldea Shinobi.
Shameless author review.Well umm i just wanted to talk about a little stuff like umm the books progress and all. Some thing are now actually clear if you pay attention. Like Eita who is the MC, his life goal, his strength and weaknesses are also clear, but his past is still blurry and will remain like that to further notice. Tatsuya who is the Male supporting character is still a mystery, Mei who is the female supporting character is still a mystery too. All these have a connection or two as the story progresses which will be fun i guarantee that. All you have to do is play your part, vote for me and give some reviews how you see the book and where i need to correct myself and all, this helps me get better and also helps my book reach more audience, please note that there are no system, no hack abilities, every character's ability is a product of intense training and talent, Please support me thanksđđ
Good novel[img=recommend][img=recommend]hoping for more chapter ahead[img=update]
About that i don't intend on making him the creator of breath styles, Yoriichi will soon be introduced.After the next fight. Tatsuya will be able to use breath, i needed him to fight with demons without breath styles so i can build a base for his strength something like that, but breath style will be introduced soon.
During this present time and era breathing styles hasn't been created, the demon slayers just basically swing their swords up and down with brute force chopping off demon's heads, and if you made some small discovery in the last two chapters, Tatsuya just became a demon slayer, no test was conducted, no exams, no nothing. Thats because the Demon slayer corp was a small secret volunteer organisation then, along the line when the organisation will grow that will be included also, if you read line by line, you will notice that the rankings are different from the present Demon slayer corp, that's also because its a growing organisation. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story
Tengen was born into the Uzui Family. So...You know the rest. His name is Tengen Uzui, Just like Kyojuro Rengoku, his name is Kyojuro who was born into the Rengoku family. I did my research before starting this Fan fic
Soon you will understand why I made that statementđđ
hello there my lovely readers, it's author speaking so I wanted to share the idea behind my book well firstly as you can see the book is all about the Sengoku era known as the Demon slayers Golden era My Main character is Tatsuya Uzui from the shinobi clan Tatsuya will grow up knowing only bloodshed, killing, deaths, pain and suffering, I know you will be like what kind of author makes his reincarnator suffer like that, well guess what, it me that's the author Alltwen suffering and pain are all part of the character build up, its like a phase that's I needed to create the shadow breathing technique Because in my world's concept shadow doesn't have any natural link, the breathing forms are all made of fir breathing,water breathing, thunder breathing, sound breathing, mist, sound and so on according to demon slayer world's concept of story, Yorichi Tsukuguni was the creator of Breathing techniques and his fellow Slayers were not able to use it so ge decided to teach them the one that was compatible with the body or physique He taught the first fire pillar a part of his breathing style that utilises explosive power while clean cut and that was how the fire breathing was created And so on Now the concept behind the shadow breathing is, unlike the other breathing that you like draw the energy from nature to boost your speed, strength and so the shadow breathing actually draws its power form within, it eats from the users will Tatsuya My MC was a failure he only relied on brute strength and always blame the death of his comrades on himself and always sort to become strong and revenge that was his will You get the gist right I know my review here was not that detailed sorry about that, but I'll explain everything on my book NOTE: If you don't like weak to strong MCs or Hard working MCs.... I'll advice you to stop reading, like honestly speaking Because Tatsuya Kun is going to see shit Enjoy my book đđđ And again I noticed that I haven't gotten any critics since please I'm a new author, it your critics that will make me better. I accept all critics, but please don't be too toxic
please I would like to know what you find non appealing so I would correct myself please explain to me why you deemed this chapter to be so I'm humbly asking