Nice start i would suggest on grammar a little and can’t wait to see where this story goes

This has potential just got to wait and see…

Nice chapter🙏🏻 just wanted to ask is Jon gunna go by his true name soon? And will it be Aegon or a different Valyrian name. Also how will he be getting his Army to take the iron throne. Thank you for this awesome chapter again.

I apologize, I thought it was gunna be a anti-hero story and be kick ass, but it’s a cliche hero story

I somewhat agree on this, and with the story he was aiming towards I thought we would get a anti-hero/villian story, but it seem it’s a cliché fanfic about a abused Orphan that joins the hero’s… as i said before I didn’t mind how the story started, yes it was the topical abused orphan and was at least interesting, but as like every other fanfic it turns into a hero one

Overall It’s a good fanfic, but if any of you are looking for anti-hero/villian this is not for you because he joins the teen titans…yea so good luck

Typical fanfic where the mc is a beta great…

It’ good keep going

Yes

This is Gunna be fire 🔥 [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Bro better get out and kill them, and don’t let him go back to those traitors

Can ’t

She can be serious…😂😂