Vince_Sacay

I hate this dmn auto correct. Everything that I have written sounds like a bad grammar sigh, also to add, Raphael mom and mother gave birth to their daughter and son just for a simple purpose 'I am bored with your finger, so give me somebody else to fck me' yup, that is right folks, grooming everyone, grooming

Forgot to add, was that ntr really necessary author? I know Raphael somewhat has some grudges on his sister but that was stupid and really unneeded action, ntring her for what? Just to let her join his harem? Man

This novel has a very simple plot, Raphael was born by his lesbian mother and mom just for her mom to fcuk him when he grows up lol, and not just that, he also has the 'it is alright for my women to build their Yuri harem as long as my dick is the only thing they will suck' and yes, there is a yuir harem, though I love it the plot seems to stick solely unto those two and nothing more. Worlding building has nothing on it, character development was only received by his sister that he fucked right after, and have a Yuri 4some with her 3 mother's lol, it was hot ngl. And how about the characters then? They are all bland except when they are about to sex but ngl, the sex with Mc sometimes felt like it was done by a 15 year old kid, hope the author will notice that and change it, it is kind of irritating and annoying. It should be only 1 ngl, but as this novel sometimes gets me hard, I'll be giving it 2 As for the writing quality, there are times when the author made a mistake on his/her grammar,not just very often though sometimes consistent, but it wasn't that bad anyway.

Thank you so much for the review, here are my question if it's alright. 1. What do you mean by info dump? Is that those things I added when I introduce a legendary or historical figure? 2. I'm sorry but though I love to make my own set of names, having different words to translate them is much more fun for me, especially when it gives more impact to how it is called compared to english 3. The character development might be slow due to mcs origin, though he lives on his own for 10 years, it didn't apply any ability or insight that is needed in the tower, compared to lucrane who's a veteran on it. 4. Regarding the pacing, I didn't meant it to be slow, just wanted to take some times regarding every floor details and such in a tower, but I'll gladly note your words and find if I could fasten it up a bit, thanks btw 5. And lastly, thanks once again in making a review, your comment will help me find the flows in my story, and it might be tasking but do you have any particular chapter that you find lacking?

Ims sorry if I replied late, I totally click your pfp and saw bunhc of other new series, so just asking, are or am I there to give reviews to them?

Hungry aren't we?

I've been waiting for this!! This one of the reason I've stayed in this novel! Now hot giddy hotdog! Thank you author, you made my day perfect!

But let us not forget who made this all bear fruit, the blonde girl should be recognize with her great skill

This chapter is not only thanks to the author but for our Boi elandor and Claire for perfect k-drama+jap ntr storyline, good job you two, good job

I hope I'm the only one who's thinking this but, did she really have a go with her servant or whatver those 2 women were? Dmn that's hot