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create_end12dCommentedCh 206 Unforseen- create_end2mthCommented
Why antagonist, it’s a slice of life,
By the way, this is not the last we'll see of Regina. Obviously, she's an interesting character to use as an antagonist for a while longer. - create_end2mthCommented
Why write this novel?
Ask whatever questions you want related to the future of this novel, and if I feel like it, I'll answer every single one of them... Spoilers included. - create_end2mthCommented
Those are called plot holes, not rhetorical questions
I mean, had I actually promised to collect debts in broad daylight? How had I overlooked the fact that I would most likely face the sun in the process? - create_end3mthCommented
Atleast let him with this fight with absolute victory, no plot armor for anyone. Just one beast vs another beast
Ginryu stood tall amidst the carnage, his yellow eyes gleaming with a wild ferocity and madness. The battle was far from over, and the true extent of his newfound power had yet to be revealed. - create_end3mthCommentedCh 3 The Sea Snake
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"Alright," he declared, a determined glint in his eyes. "Let's do this." - create_end3mthCommented
I feel like this is gonna derail from this point on. Will come back 50 chapters from this point
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Can you make it where he doesn’t kill people, his subjects might and other nobles might, or atleast don’t make it a war thing, just build and expreince Minecraft real, like what would it be like living in a floating island, or underwater or near a volcano or in a glass house on top of titan of bravos 😂😂huh awesome
Seated in his solar, he sketched building ideas on a piece of paper, Atlas was planning on building himself a massive city in the area, after consulting the Northern Lords of course. He didn't have to, he had the power to do whatever he wanted, but better friends than enemies, it would save him quite the annoyance in the future. - create_end3mthCommented
This derailed
Ignoring the looks that they got they soon arrived at the edge of the nearby lake. And as soon as Lyanna noticed that no one was around she spoke. - create_end3mthCommentedCh 2 Chapter: 2
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Another time skip to 18 or 20
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He explains things, just do it? Don’t try to lengthen the chapters by explaining stuff. Out of prison, destroy everyone he meets and keep destroying without talking till he gets his objective, that would be much better, we won’t even care if the chapters are short
"You see, I was unjustly imprisoned by those birdmen up there, and I'm planning on destroying them. I could go fight alone, but that'll be troublesome for me so, I'll need a bit of help..." - create_end3mthCommented
Not gonna lie, I don’t know what’s happening or who even is the mc, it’s like I don’t know the English language when I tried reading your story 🤦🏽♂️😪
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Would you up his age to 18 bfr you know the whole famous and Hollywood and all the busy creating stuff instead having fun
During the editing process, we also started on the cover art. I had made drawings of the different characters in the story and had prepared precise descriptions of them, making it easy for the artists the company had hired. The art came out great, and it also helped in the success of the book.In the marketing they really pushed the fact that a ten-year-old had written the book. - create_end4mthCommented
Main character syndrome
"You think I don't already know that? If I wanted someone perfect I'd be looking for the rest of my life, I want a man whose life or death with me, I want a man who I know would kill someone for fucking with…or if I killed someone would everything in his power to protect me I know that's who you are." Mia said to me and somehow we went from taking things slow to kissing in front of the whole block. - create_end4mthCommented
Huh
Dio was hit in the face so hard during one of them that he thought he was getting arrested. - create_end4mthCommented
Complicated
If I can get to the level of control of cursed energy that Gojo has then - scratch that, if I can get a level of control even close to Gojo then I'll be almost unbeatable. The only major problem I can think of right now is Toji Fushiguro, someone who doesn't use any cursed energy. But that's a problem for a later date, I shouldn't be thinking this far ahead when I just need to focus on being prepared for tomorrow, then I can plan for the future because if I die then that's it. - create_end4mthReplied to create_end
He has to have adventures going around the world looking for parts for his design, doing cool adventures to get them, or paying private engineers to make the parts according to the design or just heisting them, building it himself just as his own private collection, no commercializing it
So for the sigh-in system, I figure things he could get would be, money, drugs, guns, vehicles, food, house hold items even dirty diapers...but what about superpowers and shit? - create_end4mthCommented
Maybe designs of cars, or recipe for drugs, instead the actual stuff, precious rocks instead of money, mostly knowledge and mind powers in case of emergency
So for the sigh-in system, I figure things he could get would be, money, drugs, guns, vehicles, food, house hold items even dirty diapers...but what about superpowers and shit?