I thought this was a lazily-written book because of the synopsis. Oh, boy was I wrong...... I'll be sticking around for a while. I think this story will be good
I could give a 5-star but the pacing is a bit fast. It wouldn't hurt to take time to progress the story naturally. But I get it, sometimes being a writer is dealing with excitement for the new ideas you thought of. But please, moderate it as much as you can.