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Vioriaindahighest

Vioriaindahighest

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I have weird taste in books 🤣🤣🤣🤣😜

2022-09-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • Vioriaindahighest
    Vioriaindahighest1yr
    Commented

    Short prologue but does the job.

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Divine Trinity Quest: Into the Server's Edge
    Games · Writersoul
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  • Vioriaindahighest
    Vioriaindahighest1yr
    Posted

    I thought this was a lazily-written book because of the synopsis. Oh, boy was I wrong...... I'll be sticking around for a while. I think this story will be good

    Divine Trinity Quest: Into the Server's Edge
    Games · Writersoul
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  • Vioriaindahighest
    Vioriaindahighest1yr
    Commented

    The way the wand was described was a bit weird.

    Standing near the iron railings, Hitori stared at a black, eleven inches wand that had a thick bottom and a pointed, slim end. 
    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
    Games · AJPaturde
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  • Vioriaindahighest
    Vioriaindahighest1yr
    Commented

    Disposable wand?

    Hitori's wand made an arc and reached its peak before it fell into the river, then drowned away. 
    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
    Games · AJPaturde
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  • Vioriaindahighest
    Vioriaindahighest1yr
    Commented

    Good start mhmm...

    Ch 1 Daily Life. 
    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
    Games · AJPaturde
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  • Vioriaindahighest
    Vioriaindahighest1yr
    Posted

    I could give a 5-star but the pacing is a bit fast. It wouldn't hurt to take time to progress the story naturally. But I get it, sometimes being a writer is dealing with excitement for the new ideas you thought of. But please, moderate it as much as you can.

    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
    Games · AJPaturde
    detail