Daoist_Masrur

this fanfic has a slow pace like a snail and the problem I have with it is not even that. 1. the author starts an arc such as the chuunin exam and when he is done showing off the mc's power he doesn't even finish the arc, straight up starts another situation to continue doing so, as of chapter 700 the chuunin exam arc has not finished. 2. The mc is ungrateful and kinda emotionless, feels like nothing but him truly exists. 3. The author created 3 disguises so the mc can do what he wants and not attract attention since he was weak at the moment when he did so, yet even after getting so strong that he could beat everyone or escape from enemies he still continues to hide behind these disguises like a coward. 4. Endless dilemma about the future changing, one time he says he can't do that or else the future changes, another time he kills an OC character and doesn't care, the author will not stick to one choice. 5. The organization that no one not even the author knows what it does, the mc created it to collect information, and yet he tries to recruit powerful characters almost as if he is trying to prepare for a war(this part of the fanfic it felt like I was reading a Chinese cultivation novel). 6. Hiruzen is turned into this kind grampa that turns dumb once he meets the mc, shikaku nara is also the same.

Well said brother, I feel the same

He wishes to gain complete freedom, yet at the first chapter he is forced to protect a woman....

you are right, I thought it would be good read till I find a better fanfic but the first chapter was enough to make me itch all over, after reading many lighnovels/fanfics I can't stand reading this kind of LN, though I would have definitely enjoyed it if I was new on this.

In almost every chapter we have this inner monolog of the side characters about how strong he is how formidable...and the hole chapter is about praising him. I've read 140 chapters, in all those chapters at least half of them are like that, add to that the chapters which are short and you have a waste of time, so I don't recommend a story where there is no development nothing beside praising and op mc.

if you have watched black clover then you would discover that the author is just following the story without adding something of his own(apart from the mc).

if I remember correctly he can teleport to only where he can see...unlike flying thunder god that can teleport to where he put the mark on...although having the advantage to surprise the enemy I think it's still inferiore to ftg

The only thing i Hate about this webnovel is that it's not free.

who Is he yelling at?