Daoist_Masrur

what's the difference between this fanfic and the original novel? I see no difference but maybe that's just me

Well said brother, I feel the same

He wishes to gain complete freedom, yet at the first chapter he is forced to protect a woman....

you are right, I thought it would be good read till I find a better fanfic but the first chapter was enough to make me itch all over, after reading many lighnovels/fanfics I can't stand reading this kind of LN, though I would have definitely enjoyed it if I was new on this.

In almost every chapter we have this inner monolog of the side characters about how strong he is how formidable...and the hole chapter is about praising him. I've read 140 chapters, in all those chapters at least half of them are like that, add to that the chapters which are short and you have a waste of time, so I don't recommend a story where there is no development nothing beside praising and op mc.

if you have watched black clover then you would discover that the author is just following the story without adding something of his own(apart from the mc).

if I remember correctly he can teleport to only where he can see...unlike flying thunder god that can teleport to where he put the mark on...although having the advantage to surprise the enemy I think it's still inferiore to ftg

The only thing i Hate about this webnovel is that it's not free.

who Is he yelling at?