Soaringray

+1

Can't wait for more chapters this is actually a great concept and I wanna read more

Next chapter when?????

Maybe if I feel like it and the goal is complete rn I just don't have any inspiration

I personally think your doing just fine but I'd appreciate it more if you focus on ice magic more than other stuff :) I just find ice powers under used in most stories but they're super coooooollll

This a repeat of before the bankai

That's kinda annoying with how strong he is

Great story so far 9/10 would recommend only 9/10 cuz there's only 2 chapters as I'm writing this otherwise 10/10

Next chapter when?

Don't try to please them too much if they're advice is bad ignore it if they're advice is actually decent maybe try and incorporate it into the story but I just wanna ask you can you please keep ice as his main weapon I just wanna imagine him doing a todoroki and freezing a large area with tons of people in it and just walk away like a badass