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OdinTheOnlyOne

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  • OdinTheOnlyOne
    OdinTheOnlyOne10mth
    Replied to Seraphinn_

    Thank you for the support man 😁. I'll do my best and never stop! Today better than yesterday, and tomorrow better than today!

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  • OdinTheOnlyOne
    OdinTheOnlyOne10mth
    Replied to DARDAR10923

    Yo man! Thanks for taking your time to read and review the story! I really appreciate the support đŸ„°

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  • OdinTheOnlyOne
    OdinTheOnlyOne10mth
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    The story has great potential! The way the author plans the situations is very good and he always ends the chapters on cliffhangers, in a way to keep the story interesting. Even my initial concerns, particularly with the MC backstory, were resolved later. Therefore, keep writing and improving!

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  • OdinTheOnlyOne
    OdinTheOnlyOne10mth
    Commented

    Guy just encounters the worst people ever to meet in a apocalypse 💀

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  • OdinTheOnlyOne
    OdinTheOnlyOne10mth
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    The story is pretty good, offering a unique perspective on the apocalyptic setting.The writing is good, making the reading not slurred and aim very dynamic, and everything else is in an interesting spot.The only problem I had was in the first few chapters, when the author made the narrator of the story just narrate the scene instead of describing it. This at the beginning may end up disturbing the reader's experience with the story, but at that point it doesn't matter because this issue is corrected in the next chapters.So keep writing, your story has good potential!

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