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ShiroNirvana1mthReplied to itsDhiAlright, good luck with your book.
"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch."- ShiroNirvana1mthReplied to ShiroNirvana
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"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch." - ShiroNirvana1mthCommented
I've read so many fanfics, that apparently I'm starting to lose patience with certain things, like for example all this unnecessary talk, just killing everyone there without 2 seconds would be wonderful, so that all this talk is meaningless.
"Dumbass," Kasper spat, his voice laced with a chilling disdain. "You saw me move like a blur, crush your men like insects, and you thought a rusty pistol could stop me? Fun fact," he continued, his voice dropping to a conversational tone that sent shivers down the Captain's spine, "that little pebble wouldn't even leave a scratch." - ShiroNirvana1mthCommented'It seems like the plot will follow this time,' Kaylon thought. He could see the fate of the two families, and indeed, they will fall in the battle against the black dragon. Hmm, that means the plot will be similar to the original storyline, which is good, a bit boring but at least it will be stable. (Don't worry, with the MC's intervention, the plot will change; I'm not one of those authors who are afraid to change the plot).
- ShiroNirvana1mthCommentedCh 4 4.Full of Anger
- ShiroNirvana1mthCommented
Honestly, after chapters 50, this fanfic got really bad, it wasn't very good before, now it's just history repeating itself and the mc making no changes, it's extremely boring and should have been finished much sooner and quickly, the only The reason I still read is because I hope that the next dimension will be more fun.
Ch 80 Chapter 80 Kale - ShiroNirvana1mthCommentedCh 30 Chapter 30 Vs Buu
- ShiroNirvana1mthCommented
finally did something
"It seems I have no choice left," a voice sounded. Piccolo and others startled, looked at the direction of the sound, including Buu, turned and glanced at Eero, revealing his body. - ShiroNirvana1mthCommented
And I'm very sad, when the mc chose the Dragon Ball verse, I was excited, but you, the author, skipped practically all the best Arcs, and it's likely that in the Majin Buu arc the mc won't do anything either, at least I think it's impossible for him to make it strong enough then little time.
Ch 14 Chapter 14 Meeting - ShiroNirvana2mthCommentedCh 121 I am Lady Focalors Dog
- ShiroNirvana2mthCommentedCh 118 Didn't he come to Heaven Dou City as a tourist?
- ShiroNirvana3mthCommentedCh 60 Chapter 60: Like all things yet like God
- ShiroNirvana3mthCommented
It's a fanfic, I actually hope you create more different and powerful jutsus for MC, I wouldn't mind, especially because I love MC OP
(This isn't a jutsu that exists in the series. I hope it's fine...) - ShiroNirvana4mthReplied to AlmightySkyDxddy
- ShiroNirvana4mthReplied to TomTucker777
I believe it's just sea water.
While a feeling of weakness did overcome him, the running shower was just enough water to barely activate the curse. If Chiba had to guess, he assumed he was at 85-90% strength.