Wow.. really cool.. I think there are some things you should edit but in the end the story is really good ... Just continue with this creativity ...

That what I want Hehe JoJo is the best 🤠 Don't stop writing Don't stop writing Don't stop writing Don't stop writing Don't stop writing

Although the chapters are short But it's a good story and I really liked it I'm excited about what will happen in the next chapters ............

Complete

Good start

Very good 😌😌 I loved it so much just complet writing this book And i love the hero 😍 It will be good novel with alot of chapters 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭