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driventoread8dReplied to Sloth_IncarnateI'd say "MHA : Shoto Todoroki - Modern-day Villain" doesn’t follow canon and adds a lot of AU elements to make it not as dull as most other MHA fics.
We will be following canon, until we aren't, and since MHA is in the final fight of the series at the time of me beginning this project don't expect me to follow canon exactly. There will be changes to the structure and original missions/plots.- driventoread8dCommentedDressed in her finest fur coat and surrounded by her most threatening men stood Teka Todoroki, looking more menacing than ever.
- driventoread10dCommented"That was really bad, Kacchan"
- driventoread11dReplied to Nar_cisse
Thanks for answering and good luck with writing!
Tell me what you thought about the writing, the events... the ending. I want to know everything. - driventoread12dReplied to driventoread
In other words, this fight left me feeling disappointment.
Tell me what you thought about the writing, the events... the ending. I want to know everything. - driventoread12dCommented
What a mess these last two chapters were. I couldn't understand a half of what was going on. Why did Touya appear out of nowhere with burn marks on his body? Why did he attack Shouta when Rei and a maid where still with him? Did i even get that right, because it was hard to understand what was happening? Why did he back off then? Why return and play those hide and seek games? And the fight that happened afterwards wasn't any less confusing, not to mention that the fight feels too dragged on, especially if they both have gotten injuries that would kill them and they shrug it off as if nothing happened. Why didn’t any of them use killing blows, why prolong the fight and put themself at risk? I hadn't had a clear understanding of the surroundings of the fight, like where was Shouto hiding, under his bed? There was also a lot of unnecessary self repeating. I like this fanfiction, but please author, try to learn how to properly write suspense, and fighting scenes. Hello Future Me has a good lecture on how to write fighting scenes on YouTube if i’m not wrong.
Tell me what you thought about the writing, the events... the ending. I want to know everything. - driventoread30dCommentedSuddenly, it seemed like he heard laughter.
- driventoread30dReplied to applo43
Chie
The woman's name was Chie. - driventoread1mthPosted
- driventoread1mthCommented🚨Insert Natural Disaster GIFs/PICs here - Most likes wins🚨(A/N: only TWO entries per person!)
- driventoread1mthCommented[A/N: Keep my wife's name…]
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- driventoread2mthReplied to Isaiah_Warner
I don't think politics is the main reason why Disney movies are so bad. The problem goes deeper than just what you're talking about. Rather, the reason why there are so many mediocre films is because big companies like Disney are trying to make money rather than make good films. Following similar formulas, instead of giving authors creative freedom.
And to Peter's surprise, Darth Revan was unlike any Sith he'd seen on the big screen. Beyond the expected and often brutal teaching methods, Revan proved to be an astute and wise mentor. His guidance often weaved between the harsh lessons of the Sith and the wisdom of the Jedi, reflecting his own complex history with both orders. - driventoread2mthCommented🚨Insert Time Travel GIFs/PICs here - Most likes wins🚨(A/N: only TWO entries per person!)
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Maybe this? lol
Even if Uchiha Madara was powerful, what could he do against chakra armor that absorbed all his ninjutsu?detailStudying under Orochimaru, the Evil Scientist of Hidden Leaf VillageAnime & Comics · ANIME_SIMPA - driventoread2mthCommentedHere's a chapter though anyway just for you guys, and so that I could inform you of this notice without making a 'notice' chapter and blueballing you guys into thinking there was a new chapter
- driventoread2mthCommented"The Hero Killer: Stain got caught by Endeavor, UGH!" Rumi cried as she threw her phone across the room, but was thankfully saved by Ren's telekinesis, "IT SHOULD'VE BEEN ME, NOT HIM!" She shouted as she fell on to the floor and hit it with her fist.
- driventoread2mthCommentedA/N: R.I.P Akira Toriyama, the man who made most if not all of our childhoods and influenced the whole world with his creations.