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alright so i reach the latest chap so here's my thoughts starting the grammar was off but as you progress through the chapters it gets better the story is good (I might be biased as it's so hard to find a proper kingdom building story ) concentrating more one the MCs army. his empire's economy as well as having different characters (even if many of them are minor with little to no role in the story but does show what kind of impact the MC has on their life as he runs his empire) though it's not perfect it's still a fun reading experience. and author i do hope you don't plan to drop this novel because of the 4.2 star rating currently I'm broke it's take a bit to save up as I still have to replace my aging monitor but once that's done I'll try to donate as much as I can within limits of course. I don't know how many people love this novel but Mr. Author don't let those people whose main complain is that the MC has terrible character because of certain morality. just know that there are people who appreciate a change of pace from the overly used Hero MC trope I've read Tyranny of Steel and this is the closest I could find.
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so your giving it a one start because of your own flaw of being Impatient shows what kind of person you are. if you had continued reading this novel you'd have known that it was revealed that his Omniscience works differently from the Omniscience we know. it's still powerful just works differently it sucks to be you someone who's impatient that you can't appreciate things that take time to build up. just sad really LMAO
I don't know why this has such a low rating read up to chapter 519 and the story is actually nice. yes first 50 chapter were a little off putting as everyone think but survive that and that's where the story really starts hitting off. to those within the story who has the ability to see the future they are right as the Mc's path to power will be fraught with a lot of hardship, pain, suffering, and lots of blood.
after reading for sometime i can say that this novel is gold but it has it's fair share of problems for one thing in every chapter that I've read you seam to have a fetish for the Word "the young" since you put it in every instance Were the mc is or using it to describe a young person it's gets very annoying at some point you really should tone it down a notch other than that I've been enjoying reading your novel. you still got to tone it down With the Word "The Young" I don't know Why you have to describe Minos as "the young" him being young doesn't really matter in the grand scheme of the story cause eventually you'll have to stop using the Word "the young" since Minos Wont stay young forever
i'm not really good at giving reviews but in short this novel is gold it's just that recent chapters have been pathetically short i've read novels where the 2 chapter have decent amount of words per chapter and what's with the word spacing as if deliberatly wanting to make it look long each wasted space could have an added sentence in them like bruh don't be lazy your novel is a masterpiece in the making don't ruin it
your complaint is valid but kingdom building was already hinted just at the title itself the mc would be the magi king but one can't be a king unless he has subjects to rule or at the very least to be considered the magi king there has to be other magi besides him for him to be one day the magi king otherwise it just might be an empty title i do like kingdom building though there too little novel like that and their hard to find
hands down one of the best novels i've read and i've only read 2 others with the same premise as this the 2 other being azimuth the elden throne and vrmmorpg dragomancer reborn i've very picky with the novel's i read if the first 100 chapters can't get my attention i won't even bother continueing to read it story is good nothing revolutionary but it doesn't have to be to enjoy a good novel grammar is good and character development is also good even side characters aren't just there for show though it aint perfect nothing is perfect i've always kept that in mind that author's are humans and they will make mistakes but that shouldn't top us from enjoying this novel overall this is about 8.5/10
is this novel dead or what last time i read the author stopped updating for months then updated again then stopped updating again and it's been 3 months did the author die or what