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I think the Problem with this question is that we realy don't know how powerfull Saitama is. In the show he never needed to go all out.

if you want to read the entirer Story you can on fanfiction.net under the name Basilisk-born.

I don't think that is chapter was bad but i think the MC needs a goal like escaping this World or something

Ann and Shiho The Star creates an empty field and a lot of distant between the thief's and the shadow. Shiho brings out a Anti-Matetiel Rifle and Ann helps aim it. At the same time Ann infuses the Bullet with fire and Shiho with all mighty. The Shoot and create an explosion. Perhaps Name it "passionate bullet/ shoot".

I think you set the bar realy high if Harry ever fight Dumbeldor or Grindelwald. If a weapon that can erase you from existens isn't enouth when he will need something realy powerfull. Maybe make the darkniss particulary resistent against attack like the colt.

those rations must have a realy high callory amount

Look at the Note at the begining of Volume 2

I think that Hermine is to important for the golden trio to function. PoA may work without Hermine but if Nev is chosen in GoF than he has 0 chance of winning

Maybe this Templars need to enter a dungeon at young age and have to fight there way out.

This Fanfiction (only read first chapter) is suspicious similar to Reincarnation Game on fanfiction.net.