Caeruleumm
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Caeruleumm2 months agoCommentedtftc
- Caeruleumm2 months agoPosted
Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
- Caeruleumm6 months agoCommented
TFTC 🫡
- Caeruleumm6 months agoPosted
Well, I am writing this review having 30 caps published, to begin with the progress could be that it is slow but sure which means that it is laying the foundations, the protagonist despite being 15 years old demonstrates a determined mentality, the power system is not very innovative but it also doesn't make the MC instantly OP. I can't say almost anything about secondary characters because they're all dead Even so, knowing who the author is, I know that he will develop a good work and maybe with luck it will succeed just like his previous work.
