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ChillNightRider11dReplied to VanHellsing6969If someone told me that God is real I will in denial.
Ves didn't believe in the existence of the soul. Yet the idea prompted him to employ his mind. He instinctively sharpened his focus onto his Jutland organ, trying to impose his will on it. He treated it like he wanted to nurture the X-Factor onto a design.- ChillNightRider21dCommentedCh 33 33 - Journey to Stardom
- ChillNightRider25dCommented
You are still thanking someone for Magic Castle in the author's thoughts and I think you should remove that as it creates confusion about whether the current chapter is a regular one or a bonus one. I thought a new second chapter would be released today but then checked and understood that you haven't removed that thanks for the old bonus chapters yet.
Ch 27 27 - Results - ChillNightRider28dReplied to Diesel4Life
Then you are wrong.
A skinny, 1.7 meter in height kid with wavy brown hair and piercing green eyes was staring back at me. - ChillNightRider28dReplied to Sinned25
That copyright protects his music from getting stolen or copied.He is paying for that protection.
Since I had nothing else to do, I bought the copyright to the lyrics of Lazy Song and went to sleep. - ChillNightRider28dReplied to gundam
Well, it's alright as long as it's good. I think we shouldn't be so picky.
[Digital Illustration Lv 27 - ChillNightRider28dReplied to CrazyZoneKO
He didn't them.Did he?
This paragraph has been deleted. - ChillNightRider30dCommented
It's 2024 and in rural areas this statement is correct and , even my family and urban areas discriminate against lower caste.
With Lyman's detailed evidence and explanations, René, who had gained some understanding, and Thomas, who was still unaware, were both astonished by Lyman's words. He said, "In reality, those of higher caste do not consider those of lower caste as beings of the same species. In their eyes, the lowly are like domesticated livestock." - ChillNightRider30dReplied to rorschach
Don't know.
During their time together with Rancho, the two of them did many things that went against the dogmas of their previous lives until they realized that they were likely unable to graduate if they continued like this. People's intellectual talents differ, and coincidentally, their good friend Rancho was an exceptionally talented person. He didn't spend much effort studying every day but always achieved high scores in exams. In their confusion, they chose to cut ties with Rancho... - ChillNightRider1mthCommented
*"We-we'll talk about this tomorrow." Omari stuttered.
"We-we'll talk about this tomorrow" Omari stuttered. "In person. I'll tell my dad to drive me over and we'll have a formal discussion" - ChillNightRider1mthCommented
Please Put a . at the end of paragraph
"Madrid White have asked to speak with you. If things go well, they could be submitting a forty million euro bid for you in the winter transfer window" - ChillNightRider1mthCommentedCh 99 Skill Combo
- ChillNightRider1mthCommentedCh 98 Chaos In London (2)
- ChillNightRider1mthCommented
Use this("") not this ('') it's hard to read.
'And the ball has been knocked out of play for a corner. Parlmer picks up the ball and kicks it over to the corner flag. London Blue will be looking to get something out of this corner kick' - ChillNightRider1mthReplied to Babel_Toon
- ChillNightRider1mthCommentedCh 3 The enticing reward
- ChillNightRider2mthCommented"Wow! This is a lot to take in" I said to myself.
- ChillNightRider2mthCommented
Please don't use fancy words in the first-person writing it looks horrible.
I blinked my eyes to try to get the remnants of sleep away. - ChillNightRider2mthCommented
Only 4 chapters and the writing is horrible I don't know what I was even excepting?
'As cold as ever,' I thought. - ChillNightRider2mthCommented
Wait a sec...
By gathering SP, I could increase my physique without having to work out and could level up my intelligence without even having to study.