UdaySriHarsha
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UdaySriHarsha1yrCommentedI think the "Whoa" mixed the future and past together as this story was a little bit in the past, just saying what i thought.
Charlotte's eyes widened. She took the pin from the box and held it up, admiring it. "Whoa… It's beautiful."