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Graf_Zauberer3dReplied to LuigiGalaxyHis name is Fat, has nothing to do with fanfic or whatever.
- Fat, would you be kind enough to bring my student one of the training blunt swords?" the butler bowed with a nonchalant face and then left to fetch the sword. During the fight, he had grown tired of marvelling at the girl's skill, that she had proven herself better than any other Piandao apprentice candidate he had seen in his life.- Graf_Zauberer2mthReplied to promethius
2 would have made it (or in other words half), as the final test of ROOT is killing your partner I believe
However, when one of their farms was raided by the Leaf Military Police Force, and he retaliated by ordering an assassination of the person responsible for the raid, it all went wrong—the assassination failed and all he ended up costing ROOT four trainees who were an year away from becoming official agents—it was a significant blow to the organisation given that the trainees were lost in a failed assassination of a lowly genin. - Graf_Zauberer2mthReplied to Sin_Vergil
Duy wasn't promoted because he couldn't really do Jutsu. While yes, he was weaker than Jonin Guy, Guy only was able to be promoted to Jonin because Duy killed multiple S-Ranks with the 8 Gates as a 'eternal Genin'. Otherwise Guy would likely be at most a Chunin (while being as strong as in Canon)
With the Eight Trigrams Divination Seal tested, Fujin decided, 'I should rest for the night. Though I am stronger, it'll be best to fight Raiga when I am properly rested. After all, that guy is someone who survived or managed to escape from Might Duy…' - Graf_Zauberer1yrPosted
First of all: I like the idea and story so far. But: imo the reaction of Ezio to the speech at school (Will of Fire) was kinda unexpected. I mean that guy leads a group of Assassin's with a few but strict rules, fighting against those that seek control. So it felt unnatural to me that he would agree with the concept of 'Will if Fire' without first questioning what this concept really means / how it could be exploited. I hope this story will be continued (no updates for 2 years) or rewritten (if so pls let us know autor-san) as it is really unique.
- Graf_Zauberer1yrPosted
Well, what can I say: This is the first review I ever wrote, so don't expect anything overly great or meaningful. I really enjoyed reading this story (binged it in less than 24h), the world felt familiar yet different (I watched only ATLA, so I have no idea how accurate some LoK knowledge was/is, but I assume it to be pretty on point) the new characters were unique and entertaining and the changes to the timeline/story seamed logical and consequent. Some time into the story, I had a pretty clear expectation how the story would end (because I saw the name of the last chapter), but my expectations where wrong in a way that kinda brought this story to a satisfying end, while there is still more than enough room to write a sequel that picks up where this story ended. All in all, I recommend reading this story (the same is true for all stories of the author I read, but this is the first I finished) or at least the first few chapters to see wether the story catches you.