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iwo8351yrPostedIf you're the type that likes reading VR-related stories then try tis novel out, if not you are missing out on something. Your world build is great, and so are the characters, there are some grammar errors in the novel, but they are only small and can happen to anyone. Overall, this is a 4.5/5, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes Video Games Novels :)
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just say 100 then
The lady took one of the many boxes to her right and handed it to James as she said. "It's ninety-nine dollars and ninety-nine cents, please" - iwo8351yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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A typical gamer
Something that Viktor was interested in was winning 10 Scoins, of course experience was also important. But since leveling up wasn't that easy, his first goal with the System was to buy a feature he considered basic and cheap, the map. - iwo8351yrCommented
That's somewhat interesting
"How do fish reproduce..." - iwo8351yrPosted
I have never read a horror story before, and I don't really like them, but yours got me hooked on. The characters are great and the world is built well. The only thing is that I have problems reading it, the grammar is not very good. But besides that, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes horror <3
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I would be hella scared
He ran downstairs to find that girl who looked like Stella but there was no one. - iwo8351yrCommentedCh 3 MIDNIGHT GAMES
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I can see death coming!
At 7 pm they were at Kevin's home. His mother welcomed them and asked them to went upstairs as Kevin was there. All of them started talking about random things. It was late, and Kevin offered them to stay at his place for the night. He said that he has a lot of games to play but all of them are midnight games. They all were young and excited to play such games. - iwo8351yrCommentedCh 1 Play Hide and seek Alone
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went form 0-100 really quick
Rule 4: Turn the candle off with the help of your blood - iwo8351yrCommented
Interesting way, to start a novel [img=recommend]
It was 2 am, and he was consistently looking at the ceiling of his new room. He stood up and took a glass of water from his side table then started looking outside from the window. There was silence and darkness. But he wasn't concerned about anything. The only thing which was roaming in his mind was the fight between his mother and father and then his mother took him and shifted to this new house. This new place seemed uncomfortable to him he wasn't sleepy at all. - iwo8351yrReplied to Maryam_Mayo
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Sleep is indeed a sacred thing!
Though that wasn't a problem as I was flung off the bed by one of the butlers. Cruel bastard, I will have my revenge. Sleep is a sacred thing that must-