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Writer of Bullet Eyes, Love At First Slash, And other stories! Melissanthi Mahut <3 I love you
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Alex_e_writer1yrCommentedCh 5 Canvass(Poem)- Alex_e_writer1yrCommented
Space between Bed and But. :)
LILY CHRIS, my best friend, those eyes that show they would love to laugh at you but she has to be organized because of an asshole sitting beside her penetrating right through mine. JAKE RAY, smirking lustfully at me. I so hate this guy, he disgusts me a lot, he is a flirt, a very great flirt, he has a very good record with girls and how good he could satisfy them on the bed but my bestie chose him to be her boyfriend. Out of all guys. Out of all the perfect gentlemen. Very Crazy to me but what would I do??. As long as she's happy with him, I should be happy for her. - Alex_e_writer1yrCommented
There should be a space between the "Cold? and Taking. Just thought you should know :)
I had to keep my hands in the pocket of my black leather jacket which I had zipped all the way up, the night was too cold, too cold for me. I had forgotten to put on a glove, didn't forget my beanie, didn't forget to put on thick denim pants, didn't forget to put on a shirt and a jacket, didn't forget the boots but I forgot the gloves. The damn important gloves. Why couldn't my hands remember I am not the type that fancies the cold? Taking a last turn to the left, I found the wooden cottage right behind the school. If Lily brought me here for trash I'm so going to kill her. Not like kill her but kill her jokingly.