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Steven_Malaki

Steven_Malaki

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2022-09-02 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Steven_Malaki
    Steven_Malaki1yr
    Replied to HellBoyMC

    I’m guessing cuz of the mc switch up I mean I don’t understand why portray the mc as ruthless and cold but switch him up so fast. He almost went into a altercation over 2 females he met for couple of days. I mean fair enough. Also the fillers practically ruin this for me too. The novel at times feel directionless and the mc is just tryna get under any females pants which is fair.

    altalt
    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • Steven_Malaki
    Steven_Malaki1yr
    Posted

    Went from good to bad. Thought the mc will be villainous? No he completely changed into neutral and then kinda senseless. Mc being calculated? Nah he preferred to almost go to war over 2 women he met for 1 day. And on top of that the harem is dog water ruins the story. All the time a female occupies a space somewhere. Furthermore, the amount of bullshit fillers that just didn’t need to happen or I didn’t need to read was unbearable and cringe.

    altalt
    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • Steven_Malaki
    Steven_Malaki1yr
    Replied to Steven_Malaki

    Okay. The novel is really good

    altalt
    The villain's side of the novel
    Fantasy · Fri123
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  • Steven_Malaki
    Steven_Malaki1yr
    Posted

    Probably a good novel but I just can’t stand the grammar. LllllllllllllllllllllllllllmcnxbbdhdbdbdbdbxncbcnxnxnbxbxbdbdUdhdbxbdhd dbhdhdhd dhdhdhd dhdhh

    altalt
    The villain's side of the novel
    Fantasy · Fri123
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