Kush6647

please not harem .................... .

The main character is daamm good story is excellent the world background develpong is also goodyou. don't reveal the main character to public yet make it hidden and powerfull. can you add more follower of main character that would be best some from elves the last thing is don't make the story like this good by adding harem or a heroine it don't match the how character presenting himself now . Altlast hope the main character would be like now , like to stay away from women ( old says: women are troublesome).

First I have to say that the translation is not good which have to be improved. The story development is good but At least the main character have to be a decent talent in martial arts. Background good and I have to the story is going nicely and I am liking it because it about the law of a kingdom. But the emperor have at least came time to time to see his kingdom. at last make a better translation and improve it