Hands in the air, this is an anime-worthy story! I can already imagine a whole series produced based on this. Adam, Eve, Michael and Radiyana make a new kind of group dynamic. All in all, a great work!

Everything about this seems very OK in a mediocre sense. Seems more like a child wrote it than a real adult. On the other hand, it'd be a good children's novel.

Your writing is perfect. Updating schedule SUCKS! Story, characters and world seem OK. Anyways continue adding more chapters for freaking God's sake!