Brian016

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I just want to right a review for myself since nobody wants to - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

yo broo... i recommend you to add more words, probably about 1k per chaps, and also, need more details for your novels for us readers to understand more clearly and also keep up the good work, i see a great potential in this novel, just work hard brotha, update more frequently as soon as possible, great work broo, even though you stopped updating it, i hope you can update it soon :3

Nice story and character development wews i need (word count, word count, word count, word count, word count, word count, word count, word count)

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ohh thank you very much

ohhh... thank you for your review, i will certainly use this to inprove my novel :3