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magickmushroom1yrPostedI'm giving this a five star rating after this update. Never thought I'd be so hooked into a novel only 9 chapters in. Love this so much. While the main plot is absolutely amazing and so unique and very intriguing, the sub-plots are also very exciting as well. I'm really excited to see what Orla and Alistair become into. And i really hope Orla ends up helping Valerie to get revenge for her mother's death and GIVE OISTIN THE PUNISHMENT HE DESERVES. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter seriously speaking OMG.
- magickmushroom1yrCommentedCh 9 Visions of the Past
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yes he is making your heart do somersaults, backflips, cartwheel. YAAASS HE IS!!!
Orla's heart started beating faster. Was this anxiety or was this what she thought it was? Was Alistair making her heart do somersaults? - magickmushroom1yrCommented
uh oh
"All the visions you see informing you about events of the past are always true. Visions of the future might be false as the future can change. However the past cannot change and thus whatever visions you see is the exact thing that happened.", told Majencio. - magickmushroom1yrCommented
What was Oistin thinking trying to kill a 3-year old I-
"Okay then Orla! Down you come! Jump!", shouted Oistin excitedly. - magickmushroom1yrCommented
Ron is a mood.
"I think I'm about to throw up.", Ronan mumbled. - magickmushroom1yrCommentedCh 8 The Haunting
- magickmushroom1yrCommentedCh 8 The Haunting
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a continuation of the pilot. LOVE THAT!
This paragraph has been deleted. - magickmushroom1yrReplied to chokolitCh 1 Helpless Cries
- magickmushroom1yrCommentedCh 5 Conflicts
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Wait she's gonna turn into a nukekubi isn't she?
"Orla! What do you think you're doing staying out this late at night?", said Oistin and immediately fell to the ground and passed out. Orla ran to her room and locked herself in. Her despicable self was about to come out as she fell asleep, and she didn't want to let her out into the world, even though she knew it did. - magickmushroom1yrCommented
Such a cutie Orla is
"Stop you two. I appreciate your interest Sydney. I really enjoy being with y'all even though I don't even know you that well. Is that weird?", Orla said. - magickmushroom1yrCommented
Is Ronan jealous of Syd or what?
"Syd she ain't gonna tell you shit this is the first time she met you at school. What do you expect how can she get so close to you in a few hours, let alone trust you with details about her private life? Chill she's gonna open up in her own time.", said Ronan. - magickmushroom1yrCommented
PTSD sucks man.
How could her brother talk about their deceased mother like that? She has never witnessed him talk like that before. He always understood her pain. How could he invalidate her feelings like that? It was almost as if he did not feel bad about their parents' death. Orla could sense an incoming flashback. She was feeling very helpless. Those merciless words of her brother have gotten into her head and triggered her. She couldn't stop crying, she couldn't breathe. She just kept on running to wherever her eyes led to. She wanted to get rid of her pain, even death was better than experiencing that horrid sight again. - magickmushroom1yrPosted
I'm loving where you're going with this. The writing quality is also quite good. Your uploading daily which is also nice. I'm really curious about the nukekubi aspect of the story. That is the title and you do not seemed to have touch on that at all. Based on the cover and the first chapters it seems like Orla is the nukekubi we are talking about, but I feel like you should get to that bit quickly.
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Woooah really like Alistair so hot
She loved how Alistair was different from the rest. Whenever she shared her parent's stories to someone they would get sad and seemed to pity her. They would make her feel terrible for her parent's death like her PTSD wasn't enough. But Alistair did not get awkward or did not pity her for her parent's passing, instead, he focused on the good part, which made her feel a lot better. - magickmushroom1yrCommented
SO RELATEABLE OMG
As you can guess already overthinking was something Orla faced very often. She would have approached someone herself only if her revolting social anxiety had not taken a death clench on her. All of these thoughts had occupied every bit of her attention as she stared at her notebook. - magickmushroom1yrCommented
Looks cool bro
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