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I won't say anything about the last one and you can think whatever you want but giving one start because it isn't harem! Sigh! I don't want to say. Not everyone is same, and it's not that I haven't written harem stories, but after a moment, they start to annoy me. What you did is same as giving a burger one start because it is burger and doesn't taste like pizza.
To be honest, I haven't novel so I don't know, but Hashirama's death hasn't been explained. Let's say that he developed cancer cells, or died with cell divison, but he shouldn't be that old. You know, Tsunade lived till new Era. If it is due to cancer cells, you can say that in the fight against 4 Kage, eight jinchuuriki, 1,000s of ninjas, thousands of samurais, soldiers from the world, Hashirama died with increase cancer cells due to rapid regeneration. It's a theory of mine, and I am using this in this fic.
That's not a normal world, nor there are any 'sane' person there. Besides, she half believed the words, and kept an eye on him.
Oh Yes! Anyways, it doesn't really matter much. I will just add something else in future.
Ahahaha :Awkward Laugh!
Mmm! I added it, and made plot a bit thicker! Haha, your idea inspired me to create Uzumaki's history. Thanks!
Bruhh! Someone finally understands! He is getting the resources to make best use of his talents, and why would he care about ownership? Unlike others who work hard for years and get a technique from village, and they can't even teach without permission, he gets what he wants with only one restriction.
She isn't even born, bruh! On fandom, it shows that she is 18 in Part II and it means she is what, 2-3 years older than Naruto, after all he is around 15-16. Adding more characters would be annoying, and I chose two because I.... it's a spoiler so I won't say!
from Uzu, I meant!
hmmm, okay I will just add one or two from now on!
I can understand Uchiha, who were Indra's descendant, but Uzumaki? They were Asura's descendant, did some mutation happen in bloodline or did they get berserk because of Kagura's Mind Eye, that can let them feel emotions. After all, the warring states period was time when everyone was on steroids.
It's canon?
he just reincarnated a month ago with talents. He wasn't born with talents but later awakened them when he got his memories. Sigh, did I not make it clear?
but better version, as it involves imagination too, unlike Momo who needs to know the molecular structure. With the help of his other talent, he can even make the things he doesn't have complete knowledge about, and the rules of the world fill the gaps in the process of creation.