Lee_Brough
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Lee_Brough11hCommentedis it me or are they getting smaller than before
'This...this is going to be fun'- Lee_Brough21hCommented
nvm i am reading it all
"Long story.." Barghest huffed, given that explaining it to her would be long, tedious and wouldn't make much sense to her. - Lee_Brough22hCommented
yea I'm not into stories that switch between characters i will be skipping these chapters and just reading jalters pov
Bright blue sky. It was strange to see, especially considering he had just died. Or did he? There was a strange culmination of knowledge flowing in his head that made his hands reach out to grab his head. Then he froze. - Lee_Brough22hCommented
this chap was ok i guess
[AN: Chapter courtesy of GeokitFX] - Lee_Brough22hCommentedArcher Fell to his knees, his palms on the ground as he took it in, he understood where he was. His body started to shake, not from fear, but from excitement. He was going to steal Armsmaster's Halberd and stick it up his ass if he had a chance.
- Lee_Brough3dCommented
i would say manipulative old coot
- Of course, a summoner's orders must always be obeyed. I will teach you everything I know. But first, will you let me take revenge on your detractors? - said the black-haired Asgardian. - Lee_Brough9dCommented
Amortality?
-Predictive Calculation - Lee_Brough9dCommented
do you mean Amortality
-Predictive Calculation - Lee_Brough9dCommented
breath? ok I guess gonna look silly when i picture it though always gonna see Natsu
'Yeah, they are right. So what's a skill name that I can use to give me dragon abilities? Something like 'dragons breath'? It sounds cool, but that's probably the only thing I can add. If I try to combine too many skills into one that would count as a unique skill and I can't add any more. I guess I should add a really cool dragon skill then, and 'dragons breath' does sound cool to me. I'll go with that.' - Lee_Brough9dCommented
is a lance a blade? I guess if it has a spear tip, then what makes a lance different from a spear...? I have no clue
'Only four unique skills huh?' I should choose skills that showcase what and who Artoria is. Maybe a "King of Knights" skill. Oh! What about an "Instinct" unique skill? That's an important part of her powers. She is also good at fighting so maybe a skill that revolves around fighting? Something like "Battle Master" or something like that. Nah, doesn't sound that good. She is good with a sword and lance, but I can't do something like "Swordsmanship" or "Lance Master" since they can go under one unique skill. Something that encapsulates both a sword and lance as well as her other fighting skills. Maybe "Adaptable Balde Combat". Yeah, that sounds good. Ok, that's three down now for my fourth one. Oh, can't forget about her dragon part. She has part of the red dragon in her so maybe "Element of the Red Dragon". Well, technically it's all Albion since he's the red and white dragon at least in Fate lore that I know of. Ah, doesn't matter. - Lee_Brough9dCommented
the 4th wall break is kind of bad to me personally, it just dosen't hit as funny if that is what you are trying to do.
"I choose Lancer Artoria for my appearance." I immediately respond to them with probably a little too much enthusiasm and excitement. - Lee_Brough10dCommented
Well might as well change the title then
I clenched my fists and planted my two legs down on the ground. My final evolution gave me a full humanoid look, which did wonders for my battle prowess and abilities. - Lee_Brough10dCommentedI threw myself on my bed and seethed in rage. In my past life, something like this would be looked at as an overreaction, but when you live on a dying planet where all you do every day of your life is slave away at work, with your only joy in this miserable existence being video games…you tend to get angry when that one joy get shit on by a bunch of trash cans.
- Lee_Brough20dCommented
i hate this skill, lazy writing
Much to her horror, her brain was once again assailed by a steady stream of information on how to butcher animals. Starting with small prey like chickens, ducks, rabbits, and hares, ending in larger games like deer, wolves, and even bears. Bloody images clouded her mind. She would have fainted had it not been for the system's intervention, - Lee_Brough21dCommented
did not need the second suddenly
Just as Kaori was thinking about how to survive in this dangerous world, an emotionless mechanical sound suddenly sounded in her head and a transparent blue panel suddenly appeared in front of her eyes. - Lee_Brough21dCommented
ah a demon or devil, depends on the place if they are the same or different,
- | Talia Morningstar | - - Lee_Brough21dCommented
Just literally said harry potter was one the character would pick seriously, why even write that then?
Teen Wolf and Harry Potter are out. While neither of them are particularly bad, I don't really want to deal with either of them off the bat. Motherland: Fort Salem wouldn't be the worst choice, but my knowledge of that universe is far less than the others. The boys is out, mainly due to the fact that I can't be bothered to deal with someone like Homelander, especially right off the bat. Star Wars is out, just because it is dangerous, more so then just about any of the other universes. - Lee_Brough21dCommented
Oh hell no insta death
[The Boys] - Lee_Brough21dCommented
Hold up deadpool should not count as street level
'Canon begins within like a month or two, so I should be able to complete another quest or two before then, and potentially get some new, or good rewards. Someone with regeneration would be ideal, maybe Wolverine? Not sure if he's counted as a street-level character or not...' Gwen thought inwardly. - Lee_Brough21dCommented
hold up where is Jason is he dead alive not existing at all?
"I wanted to surprise him, he may not say it, but I'm certain he's always wanted a sibling" Bruce said, causing Gwen to grin. She didn't have siblings in her past life...or really a family for that matter, so having a little brother, and father, was something she was going to have to get used to...but she wasn't opposed to it.