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JSchling6mthPostedShameless Author 5 Star Review! This is my first ever novel, so please be patient with me! As of now, I have no intentions of including Romance, but I will give a brief synopsis of the story below! : Jared, a random man taken from Earth is suddenly reincarnated due to the crazy ritual of some Undead Liches! Attempting to resurrect their leader, their ritual is interrupted, instead summoning Jared. But with the ritual going wrong, all who know about it are killed, leaving Jared’s soul to wander until it can the nearest body… an Ant! From here, Jared will go through a multitude of challenges, making friends and enemies along his adventures! Together, Jared will little by little carve his own path to peace and freedom in this dangerous, magical world filled with monsters and humans alike!
- JSchling6mthReplied to Nosdel
He do have two of em tho, Minsok just loses his
It was definitely seducing her. - JSchling6mthCommented"Success! A lot of mana is being supplied! Full charge!" shouted the blacksmith who was overseeing the mana battery. The gauge on the instrument panel he was looking at quickly filled up.
- JSchling6mthReplied to MS_sloth
Oh geez oh no, if only you remembered that that swords name was Ascalon
He resorted to using all of his skills and weapons including Leviathan, Ruler's Sword, Ascalon, Fighter's Shackles, Repeating Crossbow, Hand Cannon, and even the Winter Predator. These highly efficient items began to swirl in the air in the hands of the ghosts. - JSchling6mthReplied to Nosdel
Deity status seems to be relevant to the title
She knew that Sungwoo already had the title of Guardian, so she thought that this was a title that only a giant like the Necromancer could get. - JSchling6mthCommented
Funny enough, changing her occupation to 5 stars wouod probabiy be more helpful to her than regular deity status that she wouldn’t be able to use at the moment
- Compensation: Choose between the 'regular deity' and 'the right to change your occupation.' - JSchling6mthReplied to Wolvinator
To be fair, they should be level 43
- You have obtained 850,000 gold by hunting an 'alien creature (intermediate monster)'. - JSchling6mthReplied to Nosdel
Probably too powerful to show off yet lol
And Sungwoo could get the skill he wanted after summoning Victor and canceling it eleven times. - JSchling6mthCommented
So an Odin without his wisdom then? Odin gave up his eye in exchange for wisdom under a… tree. So odin with 2 eyes is much less wise.
"Right. I hear that the sailors on the ship call him Odin with two eyes open. I knew that someday he would beat Chairman Love and become the top leader, but I never expected the day would come so early when he took control like this." - JSchling6mthReplied to Nosdel
Like whatever he would like to make
(4) Free molding. - JSchling6mthReplied to Ragy_Rick
Oh no? He’s turning Gold!
"Oh, you're an exception. Cute boy. By the way, your bones seem to be turning yellow more and more?" - JSchling6mthCommented
I will say, it’s pretty pathetic that a military base would fall to 100 kid sized goblins. Even with guns not working it’s sad
"Their raid was like a surprise attack on a major military base. I don't know who's doing this, but come to think of it, it seemed that they wanted to smash the military base as if they intended to ruin us." - JSchling6mthCommented
Suddenly in first person?
Of course, even if I obtained bows or crossbows, it didn't mean I would no longer need spears or daggers. Strictly speaking, these weapons had different uses. In the battle, the skeleton frequently engages in hand-to-hand fight combat after a momentary confrontation. - JSchling6mthReplied to KneeCapBandit
Nope, been Demon since the beginning
-Additional Trait: Demon - JSchling6mthCommented"Here, take a taste of your own medicine!" laughed Noah, overcharging his large and monstrous arms with the power of Heaven Thunder and forming a massive amount of lightning cracking everywhere…! He quickly gathered it all and then…! Shot it out like a massive zap cannon!
- JSchling6mthCommented
Literally half of this chapter is a repeat of the previous one, like come on
"I am glad to see that everyone is gathered here for today's meeting. What we must adress today is very important, and no, it is not just the Apocalypse going on outside, but what is happening here, now…" said Might. His very voice made the divine realm where everyone was gathered tremble, the dragons fell silent before his authority. - JSchling6mthCommented
This is just repeating information over and over
Noah's presence weakened fate, which let Lucifer become a supreme god in this world, which then let him create a new era of chaos, managing to warp space and time to the point of bringing forth chaos gates and void gates, which were natural disasters that lead to the outside of the universe and usually connect to different planes or dimensions… they were like ripples in the fabric of space generated because the chaotic era was way too powerful and messy, even spacetime was being distorted greatly… - JSchling6mthReplied to Tristan_Morgen1234
If by recruit you mean devour, then yeah!
"So many Dragon Gods are living in this continent now? It is not as they had said originally… And this place worships two Dragon Gods… There are also Heroes and Artifacts… Hmm… There's a lot to do…" - JSchling6mthCommented
This should be IX right?
[Blood Soul Core Rank]: [Level XI: Progenitor Vampire Emperor: Middle Stage] - JSchling6mthCommented
The constant reusing of the last few paragrpahs from the previous chapters is getting very frustrating. I understand doing it for a new volume, or very important information, but at this point it’s just unnecessary and wasteful. We have to spend coins based on word count , so this is sort of abusing that.
Noah hoped that it could be another Dragon, but it could just be anything… Perhaps something he wouldnt really expect... Anything!