TheGeekWhoLived

You sure this is a translation? It didn't feel like one

Well written. Interesting. Good character design. The pace is slow though. I wish the story moves a bit faster. Looking forward for future chapters.

Wow, nice idea. Never seen it done in aSoIaF. Good move.

Indeed, but I don't think Lyanna was ever called Anna before by any of her family. But Viserys literally calls Daenerys as Dany. So, this is higher level creativity 🤓.

Everything is good, but they shouldn't kill them. Every living soul is valuable for the coming war. So, they should just give them some obsidian weapon and put Petyr, Varys and any other schemers in the vangaurd in the war with the Others.

Woww!!!!!! That was INTENSE! Loved it! Go NED!

Quite a creative and different name indeed!

I have to say, that was quite a satisfying chapter to read. Both Daenerys and Viserys' scenes

No man, I rather liked the sibling bonding. Keep it like that. Please do arrange a good pairing for Jon.

Loved it man!