So, I guess this Nick Iron is some sort of "Master of Death", i.e., collected all the hallows; which bound him to this Death entity in someway, which is why he travelled back in time to stop her.

Dude Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!! don't delete this, I was eagerly waiting for its updates. Atleast, continue posting it on some other platform. This is the best Ongoing GOT fanfictions. Your work is great. Please resume posting it!

Dude Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!! don't delete this, I was eagerly waiting for its updates. Atleast, continue posting it on some other platform. This is the best Ongoing GOT fanfictions. Your work is great. Please resume posting it!

Awesome story, very intriguing. Hope to see more of this.

Both please

Would have given a little less rating but I think I need to compensate a little for the exaggeratedly low ratings already given. I think there are a few negatives like the MC being a simp, and such. But the storyline was good. I also liked the fem lead a lot. It is worth investing time on.

self dabboou

Had a good start, but it's starting to get too clumsy with the Twilight, gods addition. It was quite enjoyable when the story was just limited to HP world.

Slow paced, well written story. I just wish Harry uses the technology system more. He majorly only used it for potions till now.

Well written and Intriguing. Felt like too much at times, but those instances are few and ignorable.

Very intriguing story with engaging narrative. Please don't drop it.

Sorry to disappoint you dude, but likability is relative. I liked the MC a lot .If you want over ambitious MCs, there are thousands of Fics out there. I liked this fic so far, it was well written. I even like this narrative mode of story. I think real scenes would be happening as the story proceeds and I hope it happens soon.

*loddy author is racist and sexist. Couldn't the translating person remove them and post?

Daphne, Rose and Hermione please!!!

Very interesting and well written story, one of the best GOT Fics out there.

Dude, grammar is not what concerned me. I read stories with below par grammar if they interest me enough. It is the way you put your idea, the way you express and execute them could be improved.

Writing quality could be improved. It's cringey at times.

{My Previous review(deleted): Overhyped. When I saw 4.9+ rating and read some reviews saying it is one of the best GOT fics, I was very eager to read it. But it turned out to be a disappointment. Poorly written, too cringy. Character designing was bad.} Now that I've overcome my disappointment, I think I can give a better review than 'poorly written'. It was a decent enough fic, I suppose; I just had a lot of expectations about its quality and plot (again coz it has a 4.9+ rating for ~30 users rating it). The story seems to be written by an amateur author with some admittedly good ideas. The scenes are written forcefully emotional. The MC doesn't act as smart as he seems to think he is. I didn't like how the author dealt with MC and Daenerys' relationship. The author should have taken more time to establish their relationship instead of using the Dreams to force the issue upon them and make Daenerys act on it immediately, pushing it on an uncomfortable MC within just a few hrs of their meeting. I can understand she has been harbouring feelings for him for a long time and is emotionally taxed by the previous events; still, it is too cringy and poorly executed. I don't even know what to say about their brilliant idea to actively try for a second kid (the first was an accident, that's fine, I suppose) when they were obviously preparing for war. So, yeah... I wasn't motivated to go further after reading the family's poorly written meeting with Robb Stark and the Blackfish at Riverrun(Ch.27 ig). This just isn't the story for me.

Baahubali!!!!!!!!