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Not a bad story. Nice imaginative writing, although some errors were seen, its an impressive work of art. Am impressed. Honestly i am. The fact that Xiao Yan is not the only actor, and his classmates are also included is also an wonderful choice. Although, i would have loved it if it was a harem

No Harem but there's romance. Just haven't gotten to the romance part yet

Honestly, it's a great story. Like I really love it. It has great story lines and background. Not to mention the grammatical arrangements and construction. It's a real work of art. The concept of world domination really did fit in to the story as well.

After noticing that action and cultivation stories are usually the best, I decided to publish this second story. As always, comment if you don't like it. Am a newbie after all and need to experience both success and failures. I wanna be that carp that leaps over the Dragon gate hehehe.

am a new author here. although m nuh really a professional author, I still want to know how it feels to have something worked out by you enjoyed by the public. so pls read my book. if you enjoy it, leave a comment and advertise it. if not, tell me it's faults.