ZeepZorp

Now Dianne is suddenly Jeanne again, except you don’t even call her Jeanne in this paragraph you call her Joanne and Jiang.

Dianne

The author constantly mixes up Dianne and Jeanne, even referring to ”Jianne” at times. It’s impossible to follow who actions are actually happening to or even which characters are present.

Same

Well written with interesting characters and a world you want to keep learning about.