I thought so. I'll figure it out later. Thanks for coming and even left those juicy stars.

Like on this one. We had the onomatopoeia a second ago and now this paragraph told us it was an explosion. We called this, explaining the obvious.

I'm not sure if an onomatopoeia still relevant these days. I've done it a lot 15 years ago on my old and early books. I just don't feel, it'll fit today's writing style. I don't know, it just my partisan opinion.

Finally i got here. I'm not sure what to say, i just felt something is missing. I've read tons of SCIFI books about zombies for decades now. I don't know. Perhaps the answers lay on the volume two? Anyway, good job, Man. I understand this is your first work. It was swarmed by grammatical errors, weird phrases, but i tried to understand the plot and you delivered it. Even thou Mark seemed like a hero to me despite on the writing itself you're trying to describe him as an anti hero.

Come on. This account only has three comments. Two comments on yours and the other one on my account. It's a big fat lie if you said it just a COINCIDENCE after what happened on the Discord server last night.

Next time if you decide to visit my story and leave something ugly in there, do not use your fake accounts. You deserved all these five stars because you're the first person that commented on my story and have the balls to confront me even though by hiding behind a fake account. I could actually gift you some coins if you were visiting my story with your real account.

I know this one is your real account. So do not come at me with your fake account next time will, ya? Just comment with your real account like a real man. Look, i'm not mad at you and i don't even hate on you. You can say anything you want, don't bother hiding behind a fake account.

There we go, the scavengers from the newbies Discord server. Apparently decided to come in here and leaving a comment merely out of hatred. Where are the rest? I thought the rest of your entourage would come and spouting the same nonsense. It's ironic how you judged a book that has only uploaded eight chapters so far as a whole summary of the book. Man, get a life. There are a lot of useful things you can do with yourself. Anyway, thank you for coming and leaving a comment. I know you didn't even bother to read a single chapter, but i believe one day we will get along. All i did on the server was a deliberate action. You'll understand sooner or later.

Hey, Buddy. How about take a look at my work? Your review seems brutally honest.