Mr_Mavers

So far so good. But please don't make him against his father right away. Maybe he'll try to bathe in the sun to quickly gain strength, for example, instead of sleeping in a bed, let him absorb the sun's energy in its orbit.

This is a thrilling and imaginative take on the Norse trickster god, blending elements of multiverse travel, meta-narrative control, and deep character exploration. The story follows a modern-day protagonist who awakens as Loki—not just the Asgardian prince of movies, but the God of Stories from Marvel's Loki TV series, wielding the power to shape realities and rewrite destinies.

Good, very good. I like asoiaf, warhammer, dune. A mess of dragons, backstabs. Starts as a brutal chess game where anyone can die—ends like a drunk scribble.

Good. Very good. I wish he will find the wizarding world in the astral sea at rank 4+. Having conquered it, he could bring the shared ideals of his past and the magus' quest for truth into this world.

The novel’s greatest strength lies in its meticulously constructed world. The magic system is well-defined and intriguing, avoiding common clichés while remaining believable within the story’s framework.

Excellent, not boring story. The heroes are not Mary Sues. The world is well-written. The main character, in my opinion, should gather people around him like the Death Eaters or the Order of the Phoenix, and not work alone with his ladies.

It seems all his evil research was before he reached the first rank mage. Unlimited experiments and the rest. He was looking for any benefit for himself.

Are all your stories only on webnovel? Starting to read, the novellas are soon deleted. Is it because of the platform rules or do you not want to continue and delete them?

The Emperor apparently exterminated wizards and witches for heresy

Interesting, updated frequently, but the story itself moves slowly. I would also like to indicate the date of the events, otherwise I’m lost when the school chapters began.