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have fun if you read it i personally hope that i can continue to write a great story and create a wonderful world filled with all sorts of oddities and tastes if you enjoy it then ill be happy
interesting name choice
seems spooky so far
oh future
thank you very much
so far it seems to have a good foundation hopefully you expand upon it further in future chapters i think you had some good ideas in this [img=recommend]
i can tell where your taking this and its not my cup of tea but you do you
this plot is a little strange to me
a bit straight forward as a description for the memory surge also you didn't need to add the last bit
hi author review here hopefully you like the first chapter this is the second story ive written so please tell me what you like or dislike [img=recommend]