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First and foremost, my review is solely based on the chapter I'm currently at (Chapter 217). Writing quality at first was decent. However, nearing 180th chapter and beyond, you'll notice a decline in terms of quality and quantity. Here's an example from Chapter 217 (it really got on to my nerves) ================================ He focused. One second. Two seconds. And then— He felt it. A faint connection— ================================ WTF is this?? It could have been okay if the author was trying to convey something amazing in just few words, but it's a complete brain rot. With lots of hyphenation at the end of the lines. Compared to the earlier chapters (100 and less), it lost substance. From paragraphs, it became a sentence per line, like lazily trying to fill a page just because you need to. Imagine reading a book with random phrases in each line and between the lines are single spaces. And font size is set to 24. Crazy right? I started reading this to pass time. But if any of you is looking for a bit of entertainment or something decent to read, this isn't it. This will require patience, understanding and if you feel bored.... like really bored. If the quality improved in later chapters, congratulations! But I already lost interest to this novel despite the initial interest I had. Maybe I can revisit this in the future, but probably not. Considering the decrease of quality and releases, author probably lost interest too.

I just started reading this novel and the story, so far, started 'Okay'. However, the choices of words used by the translator to describe the quality of items, skills, and other tiered elements are poor and painful to read. Black Iron, White silver, Green Bronze??? Isn't it easier to go with the simpler Iron, Silver, Bronze?? It will be friendly to the brain to read 'Elementary Iron' than the 'Black Iron-Tier Elementary'. And the translator seem to have forgotten to delete some of the machine-translated parts.

I really enjoyed the early chapters (<300) as it gave a new take on 'going back in time' and VR game story. However, I feel like it has turned into a dungeon crawler of a story and lost the 'urgency' of the events that the story presented. I'm not against the grind and the explorations but I'm beginning to wonder when apocalypse comes, is there anything new it can offer? Or will it become like the other generic vr novels? I'm still in mid 400 but I'm getting bored. Sure, many new events are happening but there are already a lot it that it makes you think will there be real progress for them? (Apocalypse, Rey, nether realm, raven - just to name a few). What about the world? Makes me think they are used to drag the story. (I hope not) For the women in the novel, I really enjoyed them at first as they seem to have their own character and independent of the MC, The independent Yue, cold but warm Mia, reckless Alex. But as the story progressed, they turned into kittens and would often blush. I can also extend this to many of the other characters. As for the one thing I really liked and is very consistent is how the novel is written and presented to the readers. If the author is also the proofreader, kudos to you sir/madam. I'm not a native English speaker but it's very readable and easy to understand.

This is a very good novel that that enables the author to have a good income. As expected, the ’arcs’ are entertaining and properly thought of. Chapters come regularly and when it hits 1000 chapters expect a new novel to come out. A good quality of the Author is his awareness with the readers and will engage with them so he knows when to release new novels.