Sr_Yy
Goodbye everyone today 19/10/2022 i leaved this app,i hope everyone else would leave,this app will consume you and your time,this time before starting to open this app think about the consequences
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Sr_Yy1yrReplied to Ismail_JaCh 39 If Sorry was enough...- Sr_Yy1yrCommentedCh 115 [115]It began far earlier than expected.
- Sr_Yy1yrCommentedCh 9 Taking a master, first ghost puppet
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No don’t ruin the villain tag,it you make the mc accept then make the mc only use her
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Why isn’t she dying,author you are paying much attention on her
Slowly, this humanoid entity gained features and slowly turned into an otherworldly beauty. With beautiful jade-like skin and long white hair with a pair of bloody red orbs, she stared coldly in Saber's direction. Her canines penetrated through her lips and grew unnaturally long as her nails turned into long demonic claws. - Sr_Yy1yrReplied to lux_brumalis
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"How would you feel about becoming my disciples?" - Sr_Yy1yrCommented
Merge these 2
The second skill, light ray, is pretty similar to zap. However instead of having an electrical effect, it was more like a laser beam. Before Ray couldn't properly use the electrical effect since he didn't know how to use it, but the light ray was much more easy to use. Using the electrical effect on zap involved a technique in which you controlled the electricity even while it left your body, and made it target the brain so as to stun the recipient. Overall light ray was more useful for a beginner, but zap could have more potential in combat if the user knew how to properly use it. - Sr_Yy1yrCommented
Pls no disciple make him remain a loner and pls no companions,why make him train others,instead he shkuld focus on getting stronger
"How would you feel about becoming my disciples?" - Sr_Yy1yrCommented
Both are 3?
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Pls don’t make him rely too much on others techniques make him create his path and his own technique,for example you could make him create a complete different path of cultivation
Allows you to steal and assimilate bloodlines, divine bodies, racial talents, innate physiques, etc. - Sr_Yy1yrReplied to Muperi_T
- Sr_Yy1yrCommentedCh 23 Not equal
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Pls don’t make the mc give his bloodline to others only keep it to himself
Alaric felt like learning all of these from the Heavenly demon so when he creates his own race and planets he can be considered experienced and well versed in things. Surely he would learn all these regardless of if he wants to or not as it was part of being the heavenly demon. - Sr_Yy1yrCommentedAlaric was the most effected by this as he turned his head only to see a crazed expression on his little brother's face which appeared sinister even to him who was no longer a human but a Primordial Cosmic Celestial.
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You are paying too much attention on this nobody
9. Leo: 40 Points - Sr_Yy1yrReplied to Ismail_Ja
Ok
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Why train others instead he should focus on getting stronger
"Well Then, all you better go out and get your training swords. Practice will start in 5 mins" - Sr_Yy1yrCommentedThinking about the tall handsome figure, her face instantly flushed red, but as soon as she remembers those cold green eyes, her face instantly paled as her body trembled