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Qu4ttro

Qu4ttro

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always chasing my dream -- possessor of ADHD

2022-08-20 JoinedGlobal
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    Qu4ttro1yr
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    I'm not really used to writing reviews, but I came here to introduce this to new readers. First of all, I would like to clarify that I liked the work. Screw the Hero has an interesting form of progression and certainly has the potential to become big in the future. There are still many things that could be improved, but they are minimal things that will not interfere with your reading in any way. Second, although there aren't many chapters (at the time of publication there are 12 and I've read them all), the story manages to be quite entertaining. The action scenes are very detailed, which is a plus point. The chapter frequency is also good. There are some notable shortcomings, however. Some dialogues just don't convince me. An example of this was that interaction between Rodiel and Qiyana, which although it was good in certain parts, weaves some lines that just seemed artificial.This can be worked on better, but I won't go into too much depth. What's more, the relationship of the protagonist, Rodiel, with his father is definitely interesting. Unfortunately, this hasn't been explored much, as I'm writing this. Well, anyway, I must say that the course of the story managed to hook me. The story does have great potential. With a great writing quality, if the author focuses on progressing with Screw the Hero as he spoke, then there is nothing that can stop him from achieving some success. I wish you the best of luck, author. As for new readers, I recommend this work. You can dedicate your time without fear, as it is a very dynamic and fun adventure. Keep up the great work, author! (using BB's gif because the author is apparently addicted)

    Screw the Hero!
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    Qu4ttro1yr
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    The concept of gifts and how the gauntlet works will be explained at next chapter, probably. So don't get too confused about it at all.

    Ch 11 Welcome to Brivid! [3]
    Bein' rewritten!
    Fantasy · Qu4ttro
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    Qu4ttro1yr
    Commented

    I'll try to publish one more chapter this afternoon, so we can enter the Academy Arch once and for all.

    Ch 8 The Epitome of Teaching
    Bein' rewritten!
    Fantasy · Qu4ttro
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