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Detective_Raven

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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven22h
    Replied to Taxue_no_Woz

    Never to be seen in Shippuden again and didn't increase her combat ability in OG and we are talking about when she is a child where MC is gathering information she has no relavence whatsoever.

    'Sakura Haruno's danger rating is.. hahahaha.'
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    Naruto : Hidden Cloud
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven1d
    Replied to Black_Reeper
    Now imagine how it feels to be thrust into the World of Ice and Fire, a world with icy demons and zombies on one side, and fiery dragons with an army of barbarians capable of only looting, raping, and killing on the other. Why was I sent here?! I would never have agreed to this madness in my right mind! "Damn!"
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven1d
    Replied to HiyoriSimp

    I never said we need to follow someone's method after all everyone has different strengths something COTE Fanfictions(as per I have read) seems to want to make MC like Hidden boss like Ayan when in reality he is merely doing it because he seems to have different goals and different strengths. I for one see myself if I somehow end up there trying to make contracts before anyone gets familiar with the rules (Though I have only read Fanfiction and watched few episode) otherwise it would lead to massive disadvantage.

    Being a dictator was not very advantageous, and leading the class tied him down too much. Renka wanted to have as much freedom of movement as possible, without bothering with such troublesome roles.
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    Crazed Lust System: Classroom of the Elite
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven1d
    Replied to HiyoriSimp

    No I am saying it so Author can put foundation. He could just try to abuse the point system and make deals say before they come to realise about S- system. After all MC only be smarts as the what Author want and thier capability to deliver it without Plot holes.

    Being a dictator was not very advantageous, and leading the class tied him down too much. Renka wanted to have as much freedom of movement as possible, without bothering with such troublesome roles.
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    Crazed Lust System: Classroom of the Elite
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven2d
    Replied to JustLazy1

    Hmm how about editing it Author?

    "Eh? What does that mean?" Shiranami looked confused.
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven2d
    Commented

    Hey Author did you skip any sentence in between because before this he was monologuing.

    "Eh? What does that mean?" Shiranami looked confused.
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven4d
    Commented

    To the contrary being a Dictator gives more leverage and Freedom anyone telling otherwise is selling something you only need to take a look at Chaos at Classroom C Fic where Yukio does what ever wants due to being a Dictator Author can you reconsider his approach?

    Being a dictator was not very advantageous, and leading the class tied him down too much. Renka wanted to have as much freedom of movement as possible, without bothering with such troublesome roles.
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven7d
    Commented

    Can you explain why doesn't have Speed Force did he forgot the formula?

    Anyone who's into fate may have recognised who the 'witch' is by context alone, if not that, then by the weapon Aston/Tyron is holding. Tyron is Aston Alter, an Aston from a culled timeline where he didn't have the speedforce, no cheats whatsoever and took an extremely different path compared to main timeline Aston. An Aston that didn't meet Artoria in the way main Aston did.
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven9d
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    Make him take any Magecraft he come across in the singularity also make him learn as many spells as possible. Since he has Medea as servant he can learn from her. We can check whether it has limitations or he could learn Divine words too considering he is going to Lostbelt where True ether is present check he can learn Item creation too.

    Right now they are in the simulation room as Felix is learning and practicing using other spells in case he didn't have the gun at hand. He isn't going to be cocky about it as he knew how dangerous the mission is, not to mention the first singularity in which he almost lost his life. The others with him were Olga, Mash, Artoria Alter, Archer, Iskander and Medusa.
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven9d
    Commented

    Well Archer stats are pretty average since you have mentioned she doesn't about his projections she shouldn't be considering him a strong servant. Unless her bar for strong servant is pretty low.

    She was also very happy with Archer as well considering how strong of a servant he is. Though Felix is quite certain that she will probably lose her mind when she sees him using swords as projectiles.
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven9d
    Replied to CORINTHIANS1910

    Understandable

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    Naruto: A Life On The Battlefield
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven10d
    Replied to CORINTHIANS1910

    Why not?

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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven11d
    Commented

    Does he realise he is in a Anime World? Even if one doesn't know the show or world they end up say if I get reincarnated and see a girl getting red faced while conversing it would rise red flags. I am asking this because he doesn't seem to mention or question the world he ended up in.

    Yukio nodded subconsciously, Ibuki's openly stated reason seemed perfectly reasonable, but why did her face grow even redder?
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven15d
    Replied to Cultured_Daoist69

    As per Story mode I look forward to it.

    Ch 91 9) Birthday special-
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    The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven15d
    Replied to Cultured_Daoist69

    There are various kind of Yandere someone who would sacrifice themselves or liability etc. In your case you must have build up the Mother's character by Bai Lung mentioning about her here and there instead of this considering how the Yandere is his mother. I would advise you to watch few videos, and read stories about Yanderes to make your own untill then you can put the mother in Hold after he knocked her out.

    Ch 91 9) Birthday special-
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven15d
    Replied to Cultured_Daoist69

    Seriously though it seems it is your first time writing Yandere there is no build up, no premonition, noting or even Flashback of MC saying about his mother I even nearly went to sleep while reading this. Rectify it Author also share the lore of the world World building like important sects, Continent and the race that inhabitants it. Even legends and mysteries that surrounds the world.

    Ch 91 9) Birthday special-
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven15d
    Replied to Cultured_Daoist69

    Not truly your have posed like some kind of Test lol.

    Ch 91 9) Birthday special-
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven15d
    Commented

    This chapter is mid and are you serious about the options?

    Ch 91 9) Birthday special-
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven16d
    Replied to Cultured_Daoist69

    Anyway we need to wipe out Xi Family for ordering Bai Lung.

    [ Not a scam!!! Yeah! I know I got a castle to cure him, however, He will be fully cured very soon, it's just, that I want to write an arc for that where he goes on an adventure, if you want him fully cured without adventure then comment now ]
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  • Detective_Raven
    Detective_Raven16d
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    Next time mention the name lol I thought it was a common vote.

    [ Not a scam!!! Yeah! I know I got a castle to cure him, however, He will be fully cured very soon, it's just, that I want to write an arc for that where he goes on an adventure, if you want him fully cured without adventure then comment now ]
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