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Never to be seen in Shippuden again and didn't increase her combat ability in OG and we are talking about when she is a child where MC is gathering information she has no relavence whatsoever.
I never said we need to follow someone's method after all everyone has different strengths something COTE Fanfictions(as per I have read) seems to want to make MC like Hidden boss like Ayan when in reality he is merely doing it because he seems to have different goals and different strengths. I for one see myself if I somehow end up there trying to make contracts before anyone gets familiar with the rules (Though I have only read Fanfiction and watched few episode) otherwise it would lead to massive disadvantage.
No I am saying it so Author can put foundation. He could just try to abuse the point system and make deals say before they come to realise about S- system. After all MC only be smarts as the what Author want and thier capability to deliver it without Plot holes.
Hmm how about editing it Author?
Hey Author did you skip any sentence in between because before this he was monologuing.
To the contrary being a Dictator gives more leverage and Freedom anyone telling otherwise is selling something you only need to take a look at Chaos at Classroom C Fic where Yukio does what ever wants due to being a Dictator Author can you reconsider his approach?
Can you explain why doesn't have Speed Force did he forgot the formula?
Make him take any Magecraft he come across in the singularity also make him learn as many spells as possible. Since he has Medea as servant he can learn from her. We can check whether it has limitations or he could learn Divine words too considering he is going to Lostbelt where True ether is present check he can learn Item creation too.
Well Archer stats are pretty average since you have mentioned she doesn't about his projections she shouldn't be considering him a strong servant. Unless her bar for strong servant is pretty low.
Understandable
Why not?
Does he realise he is in a Anime World? Even if one doesn't know the show or world they end up say if I get reincarnated and see a girl getting red faced while conversing it would rise red flags. I am asking this because he doesn't seem to mention or question the world he ended up in.
There are various kind of Yandere someone who would sacrifice themselves or liability etc. In your case you must have build up the Mother's character by Bai Lung mentioning about her here and there instead of this considering how the Yandere is his mother. I would advise you to watch few videos, and read stories about Yanderes to make your own untill then you can put the mother in Hold after he knocked her out.
Seriously though it seems it is your first time writing Yandere there is no build up, no premonition, noting or even Flashback of MC saying about his mother I even nearly went to sleep while reading this. Rectify it Author also share the lore of the world World building like important sects, Continent and the race that inhabitants it. Even legends and mysteries that surrounds the world.
Anyway we need to wipe out Xi Family for ordering Bai Lung.
Next time mention the name lol I thought it was a common vote.