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It's a shame the chapters feel short, but for now I think it's the best I've seen in a long time. I'd also like to see things like the fog and the main characters.

That makes no sense right now. She doesn't love him; she despises him. She's clearly showing obsession right now, and a man like him never changes—a womanizer and a drinker. I don't know how the author will handle it, but getting them together and having children would be very strange. Will Ned just let him take her away?

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Mmmm

For now, there's nothing new. We don't know what direction this will take or anything. I suppose that, like me, others are just waiting for more chapters. Also, considering the novel it's based on, there's really nothing new. We don't know anything about whether the family will fit into the town's dynamics, what they'll be like, or other things. So, all that's left is to keep waiting for more chapters.

I hope he kills her. She doesn't love him or anything, and she's the granddaughter of one of her mother's enemies. I don't see any reason to mess with her.