It's good I never knew that I would get to read a Technology story it did seemed boring little at first but at 2 and 3rd it was interesting. Sorry I couldn't able to read anymore as I have to go and write my next chapter good luck with ur next chapter.

I really loved your synopsis and first chapter. It was eye-catching where the girl asked the murderer of her mother to kill herself. Well in reality people wish for revenge. Anyways, It did really caught my eye and please keep going I wish you all the very best for your novel