So far this is probably the author best work despite it only have like 4 chapters when I posted this, The MC is interesting as a character and a person, Amelia also is really well written character despite the fact she mostly appear in a flashback as a kid. I rarely vote or comment on other people story but if it for my dear Othi then I will do it UmU

That is cool and all but why not genderbend Issei and put him in the harem?

My boyfriend told me to pick them both, two is better than one but I'm not sure bout that

Yeah I always have been a girl 🤣 Just a bit pervert, funny thing I actually put my irl face in my pfp before changing it into Bremerton.

My boyfriend make me watch this with him. And yeah Roxanne is a bada*** and a cute girl

Im still watching Gurren Lagaan, Just finished episode 11 where Simon become a man. I probably consider changing Sinon to Yoko after finish the story

Bleach girl is hard to put in the harem...I can't choose one. Too many good option

You know Ren I had never think of that before, that was a freaking great Idea. I think I can tweak my story for a bit, considering I'm still writing the outline. But how about same crew but different ship? For example Luke, Makino and Ann set sail before Lucy so they can make name for themselves and Lucy who want to become the Pirate Queen want to prove herself to them that she can bring new crew mates for her King, Luke. They will meet up at Loguetown or at the beginning of Grandline to combine the crew to become one. Is my idea good or bad?

Ahahaha sorry for disappointing you

Yeah I'm doing okay now - thanks to my bf taking care of me

They will still straw hats, Luke still will play a big role for their story just not going to follow them 100%. Lucy has her own dream to chase so she can't follow Luke tail all the time. Luke will join them in some adventure like Ace in anime filler. He will also joined the Straw Hats' adventure in the New World. Mostly making sure that Momo stay put. Robin, Nami and Lucy still in his harem. Just not in the same crew. He want Nami and Robin to follow him like the rest of harem, but Lucy still need them more than him cause she need them to survive the Grand line. It honestly will be funny when Sanji throwing tantrum when he saw Luke walking into the Straw Hats Girls' cabin and heard some loud moaning. No hate for Sanji but I do enjoy his reaction when He saw Zoro with Hiyori. Imagine how is his reaction when he saw three beauties are clingy to one guy.

thanks for notifying me

Ahahah it's fine, I didn't really know it was hard to find a female author on this site. I just want to try something different like giving the mc the taste of being a father. I usually ignore blind hateful comment but I certainly read the critics to improve myself as a writer. The funny thing that happen when writing this story is my inner circle of friends actually got mad at me for giving too much focus on Ann and Luke relationship to the point where they forgot that this is a harem novel.

Is that so? To be honest I dunno how long It will take me to finish this story. Maybe around 600 or 700 chapters?

Long Story, I dunno when it going to end but probably take more than 100 chapters.

Yes...

yeah he can use the characters power but not all of them for example if he get Naruto he will get Walking on the Water/Tree and Kage Bushin. If he get Ichigo he will get Getsuga Tensho and Shunpo. It also not as strong as the original user, If Goku Kamehameha can destroy a planet, Luke Kamehameha can only destroy a Country.

You mean like using the characters power?

Current Luke's strength is can be said slightly weaker than Arlong and East Blue Luffy and his endurance is not the best but his speed alone surpassed everyone in east blue arc but this doesn't include his DF and Weapon. Level Cap System work like a rank for example if [Level 1 - 10] is F-Rank then [Level 11 - 20] is E-Rank. The reason why Luke growth is rather slow is because the East Blue doesn't have many dangerous pirates like the Grand Line do. The stronger the opponent is the easier for him to growth in strength. There is some future buff for Luke which you either expected or unexpected.

I don't really want to spoil but he will get stronger later. He will increase in level rapidly because of a certain 'reason'... Crystal is easier to get in Grand Line than East Blue.