Toyoyong_Botoy

In the first few chapters u describe the mc to be cold one, the type like he doesn't care whether they like him or not. Then when his stepmother and emma insult his mother he lost his temper cuz he holds "deep affection" for his mother who abandoned him since baby without any reason(well its not mentioned why she did). The hell is that?????? Its barely considerable if u dont hate her or dont have feelings for her yet to have a deep affection for someone u didn't know how or what she looks like, the fck is that??? "Deep affection" for a stranger hahhaha, just a few chapters and i encounter this inconsistency

Good thing i didnt missed this.. "His voice cracked through his hoarse throat. Fear terrified him to the point where his bladder failed him and his urine was now dripping through his pants"(ch.1) So no matter how amazingthe mc will become he will alway be a pants pisser in my mind🤣🤣.. I cant continue reading a novel with mc like this

It was fun at start but after laylah and mc meet, it turns out from 9 to shit, the author just overdid it on how intelligent/awesome laylah that the mc looks so pathetic......... it was amazingly stupid for the author. Maybe the author ate shit b4 writing that chapter(ch. 36 or 37) haha( i wont be surprised if he/she really did ate shit)

When you copy a novel,... thinking that you can make it better,... but it turns out to be more shitty than the original..... 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

The moment he woke up from coma(training with the goddesses) it directly shows the results of his traning. First, the result from training with the goddess of wisdom, it directly shows by asking stupid questions from d system. Second the result from training with d goddess of lust, by resisting charm. Wen he notice the sleeping risa he tried to touch her pink lips, but unfortunately he doesnt hv strength not to mention risa isnt using charm.. Such amazing results😅😅😅

I thought this was awesome at first, but after ch.33.. He fights with an old man.... With those op upgrades/skills he got from the system he should be op, yet when he fight with someone with same cultivation realm as him they r evenly match how stupid...

Im done with this.. Too much bullsh*t about hiding ablities/identity for a lame reason that he'll be n danger.. It ruins the "OP MC" lyk ur super awesome yet no one knows, maybe u should just hide ur novel so the mc will be safe

No good..feng lei is better than him.. Feng lei should just be the mc, wat a irritating author.... waste of time....................................... ................................

I wonder why it has a " overpowered" tag when its not... Hes only mediocre it should be "weak to strong"... Or "weak to mediocre" i find this boring

WOW WOW WOW..... a mediocre boring novel with a stupid losser mc.. there should be a tag of "weak protagonist", "stupid protagonist" what a waste of time