Amazin_Nothingness

I love your story

The pacing is a bit slow at first, but once it picks up, you're hooked. The whole "madness, power, and morality" thing is real—you're constantly questioning who's right and who's wrong. The world-building is solid, and the character development? Top-notch. You really feel the internal struggle. But I DO NOT f with MR. N at all. So ur telling me it took him THAT LONG? TO acutally feel something for Liam? I mean thsi might be some cartoon shit but its impossible to root for him. Just hope liam recovers from his weird trauma though thats my review good stuff truth.

9/10 but ill give u 5 stars im looking foward to the future of the space travel the character desings arent really described but this takes place in the real world ig so its no big deal

Not bad The grammar is a bit weird at times but its fluid enough nothing special though. The updates are fair once a day is pretty valid. Story dev. is amazing not gonna lie the pacing is soo fast and it moves foward soo well but not in a way where you think they are moving too fast lol. Character design is lacking because you havent really described their looks World background so far is a 9/10

favorite chapter so far